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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 56)

Kishmish IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Big smile



Arnav's relationship with his Dada Dadi was and is so beautiful ... 
his Dadi understands him to the T ... 
and gave him the perfect advise about his relationship with Lavanya ... 

The glimpse into their childhood was so beautiful ... 
Sneaking out of the house and watching the sunrise everyday ...   

"And for the next many more mornings to come in their five years of friendship, they had together walked in the dark, hand in hand and 
seen the sun rise in their lives..."

and sharing a most beautiful and carefree childhood ... 

can feel her grief at the loss of a childhood ( an only ) friend ... 

"And the tears simply couldn't be held back by her eyes anymore, 

as she broke down and wept at her loss, the extent of which she 

hadn't estimated until now and kept delaying it all throughout 

these fifteen years away from him..."


Thanks for a beautiful update ... and loving the way you are going about 

the story ... we are in it with you ... LOL 

whenever you want to reveal about their past ... 

Hope the sun rises in their lives in the present too ... soon 





Edited by Kishmish - 15 April 2013 at 7:00am

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molten_lava

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:38am | IP Logged
i absolutely love annyav and kuku!!!!! they are so adorable!Smile

great update!
loved it!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Hey i am new hear..and getting attached to this ff emotionally..i feel like crying for the distances that the society imposing on their frndship..realities of life..

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Another amazinggg update form you!!!

Its such a jot and change to read arshi as childhood besties and than the apparent indifference and stranger like looks arnav give her presently!!!

Loved it

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 6:51am | IP Logged
their beauiful memories pure and innocent wer the highlight of the chapter...they made me happy and sad at the same time... happy at the subtlity and sad at how they are akin to strangers now...
i guess his dadi will be an important character , she seems to be a strong woman...

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 7:02am | IP Logged
u're an awesome writer u.now molten lava...d way u make nd potry a stry is commendable..:)

i was just wondering why r u not makin MIRAGE into a full fleged.novel...plz publish dis stry...:)

nd den dis...it seems like fairtail...:) d way u join d past nd d present...d stry has it own uniquiness...nd i'm not realy lookin forwrd to d past wich separated dem bcoz havin followed mirage dere is no point wastin our brains in guessin d truth bcoz ultimately u will take u're own sweet tym...:)

nd d bSt part is u gave us d tym for d nxt update as well...

molten lava its a pleasure nd bonour havin a writer of u're calibre among us nd writin for us...:)

u're really an awesonme romantic thriller writrr...:)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Amazing update,dear.U portrayed Khushi's feelings so nicely.Their childhood memories were too cute.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 7:12am | IP Logged
awsum updt
loved d convo bwn arnav n dadi
fbs r cute

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