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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 54)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:08am | IP Logged
loved the update...it was sad but really loved it...atlast the truth hits khushi, that arnav has definetly moved on...and it was soo sad...i felt sorry for the poor girl...
bu have realised one thing she always remembers arnav as her only best friend and never is against him just like he is...she doesnt think about htat whatever happens in the past and is always cherishing the good ones...poor thing the truth was hard on her...
i guess arnav would have lot to do...byt he way loved about dadi...so no one goes against her and she loves khuhsi...some thing to think about...
loved the update.. 

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:13am | IP Logged

Nice Update:D

The conversation between Arnav,and Dadi was sweet.I liked the way she told him never to break woman's heart.

The two memories of Arnav n Khushi ,one of the sunrise and other of Arnav's bedroom both very adorable,cute.

I feel for Khushi.We make friends in our lives ,but childhood friends are always more special..and more close to heart.<3

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:24am | IP Logged
MAST UPDATE...Tongue..AWESOME...Big smile

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:28am | IP Logged
U are back??!!?! And that too with new story??? OMG!!!
I just read few chapters n m loving it!!!!!
Will comment in detail later...
Keep up dear...

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:41am | IP Logged
I like the way the story is going... No speed breakers and stuff... Like a gentle stream... All the way... U re beautifully taking present and the past together... Lovely...
nice update

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:42am | IP Logged
its touching 

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Seems like Dadi has an idea of what has gone through or maybe what's going on. Pushing Arnav in the right direction.
Feeling sad for Khushi. Going through so much.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 4:51am | IP Logged
*New reader alert*Big smileBig smile

This story is hauntingly beautiful..The subtlety,the pathos,the beauty - you leave me speechless.It is one of a kind and I must say I am floored!!

For the first time in my life..I feel terrible for Khushi.The girl still searching endlessly for the lost innocence!!So,so heart wrenching!!

And subtlety is your forte.You do it so well that it awes me!!ShockedClapAn amazing story dudetteThumbs UpWaiting for the next chapter!!Embarrassed

PS:The kids in the bannerEmbarrassedThey are adorable!!Big smileEmbarrassed


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