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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 52)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Wonderful update Smile

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:07am | IP Logged
awesome update

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Hola Big smileBig smile

It was easier to stalk you late night than morning LOLLOL

The chapter was really nice, I enjoyed reading it ! 
I love Dadima ! She is so ... perfect LOL you potrayed her as a perfect wife and perfect Dadi !!

The trio Ma, Nani and Mami ROFLROFL like Charlie's Angels !

Arnav and Khushi's parts were so cute and so heart breaking at the same time ! I feel so sad for Khushi !

In the third chapter you showed that Anjali was also in their bonding, but now she's missing !! Why ?? 


Short comment Disapprove, long comment probably on wednesday, as I'm bit busy with tests OuchOuch


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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Fantastic update..i luv the kids ..so pure nd untainted...u hve described them perfectly..
Arnavs grandmom seems a wise women..

Eager for next..

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:14am | IP Logged
Btw I know you won't reveal anything soon, but I didn't expect you to reveal the dark secret only in the climax ShockedShocked

So no fight sequence in the climax CryLOL
Just kidding Wink

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Agathe

Hola Big smileBig smile

It was easier to stalk you late night than morning LOLLOL

The chapter was really nice, I enjoyed reading it ! 
I love Dadima ! She is so ... perfect LOL you potrayed her as a perfect wife and perfect Dadi !!

The trio Ma, Nani and Mami ROFLROFL like Charlie's Angels !

Arnav and Khushi's parts were so cute and so heart breaking at the same time ! I feel so sad for Khushi !

In the third chapter you showed that Anjali was also in their bonding, but now she's missing !! Why ?? 


Short comment Disapprove, long comment probably on wednesday, as I'm bit busy with tests OuchOuch


@ BOLD: That's the difference. Arnav and Khushi were best friends. Anjali and Khushi were just friends. Anjali was there with them some times. But their most special memories only contain the two of them. Because subconciously their friendship was more than just friendship and they haven't realised it till the date.Heart That's why Anjali is conveniently missing in most of their memories.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by molten_lava


I don't mind the predictions. Keep them coming. I see another Agathe and Mysterious_maze in the making here.LOL I meant the comment for others who are unfortunately completely clueless about the past and from their comments it just seems as if they want me to reveal it in the next chapter thereby defeating the entire purpose of my story.LOL And that curiosity spoils the entire beauty of the FF.

oh la la tough competition !!
Lilly, we should be careful ! LOLLOLLOL

I think it's too early for me to do any prediction !! LOLLOL
I'll wait the story to progress WinkWink

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Agathe

Btw I know you won't reveal anything soon, but I didn't expect you to reveal the dark secret only in the climax ShockedShocked

So no fight sequence in the climax CryLOL
Just kidding Wink


Yes, it will be revealed only in the climax because history will be repeating once again. And Arnav will get a chance to redeem himself from his guilt. Like I said before, I plan the end of the story even before the beginning. I don't drag the FF unnecessarily and I felt the dark past revelation would pave way for the end of the FF.

yes, there won't be a fight sequence physically in the climax!Wink But there will be one hell of a verbal fight and lots of tears and drama for sure.Wink

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