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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 51)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:02am | IP Logged
going to strt reading nw ...:-) :-)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:02am | IP Logged
WinkBig smile
Originally posted by molten_lava

Originally posted by AquaSandhya

 Love you Dadi 

" Hunch back seems a much better option." -  Tears express the powerful emotions the best and you made me cry today ML. Annyav and Kukku are the best of the best and so pure is their relationship that it is extremely painful to watch the grown up Arnav being eaten alive by his mind and the present day Kukku attributing their lost friendship to the difference in their status Cry 

I love your inisght into grandmoms psyche and totally and absolutely agree with you. They are more accepting of life and the various challenges that are faced by the family ... better than our moms coz they have seen the world and relationships change over decades of living. Thus comes their accptance and understanding of what is best ... Khushi is the one for Arnav Thumbs Up. Love you Dadi!!!!

While I wasn't a part of IF during the time you wrote Mirage, I had the opportunity to read it in one go a few months ago and yes, I remember the various twists and turns and the baap of all secrets. Of course I loved it. So, My dear writer, I will try my best to not guess the plot line but cut me some slack if I make predictions once in a way. I am only trying to see if I have enough brains to second guess your thoughts LOL

Loved this chapter. Thank you :)








I don't mind the predictions. Keep them coming. I see another Agathe and Mysterious_maze in the making here.LOL I meant the comment for others who are unfortunately completely clueless about the past and from their comments it just seems as if they want me to reveal it in the next chapter thereby defeating the entire purpose of my story.LOL And that curiosity spoils the entire beauty of the FF.

Super Big smile. Look forward to exciting chapters where the highs and lows of life bring Arnav and Khushi together forever Wink

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:06am | IP Logged
wow...this is awesum...loved it :)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:09am | IP Logged
"Then, your Dada would have come after
you with his rifle to shoot down his
competitor. He was quite possessive about
me, you know." She said, winking at him... Dis particular lines was so damn cute .. Wat a grt bonding..

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:21am | IP Logged
You kept to your word and delivered on time!

What a heartbreak for Khushi! Surely, Arnav must feel the same somewhere. Could he have really forgotten all that he had once treasured?


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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:39am | IP Logged
Finally read d update ...:-) :-) it was fun loving seeing d bonding of annyavv and dadi .. at d same tym it made me cry dat khushi lost her beat frnd yrs ago ... c couldnt shout her name lyk c used to cal ..

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:51am | IP Logged
lovely!

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Hi ML,
I couldn't hold back my tears after reading this update...
I feel sooo nostalgic...as I have written before, childhood memories makes me...I miss it...
U have written about their childhood so beautifully...It hurts to see Khushi's hurt...beautifully depicted...Clap, the loss, the pain, the hurt, the helplessness...everything...
U are just too good...and yes as u have written in your note, I too like the subtle flow and growth in relations, its more real...
Take care dear...and...
Keep going...

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