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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 50)

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by molten_lava


I don't mind the predictions. Keep them coming. I see another Agathe and Mysterious_maze in the making here.LOL I meant the comment for others who are unfortunately completely clueless about the past and from their comments it just seems as if they want me to reveal it in the next chapter thereby defeating the entire purpose of my story.LOL And that curiosity spoils the entire beauty of the FF.

oh la la tough competition !!
Lilly, we should be careful ! LOLLOLLOL

I think it's too early for me to do any prediction !! LOLLOL
I'll wait the story to progress WinkWink

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Agathe

Btw I know you won't reveal anything soon, but I didn't expect you to reveal the dark secret only in the climax ShockedShocked

So no fight sequence in the climax CryLOL
Just kidding Wink


Yes, it will be revealed only in the climax because history will be repeating once again. And Arnav will get a chance to redeem himself from his guilt. Like I said before, I plan the end of the story even before the beginning. I don't drag the FF unnecessarily and I felt the dark past revelation would pave way for the end of the FF.

yes, there won't be a fight sequence physically in the climax!Wink But there will be one hell of a verbal fight and lots of tears and drama for sure.Wink

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:21am | IP Logged
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me nahi soch rahi..me nahi soch past ka.. :D bas guesses aa rahe hai dimaag me..
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usi me toh padhne me maza aata hai!

Ofcourse! And it hurts me too that khushi remembers everything and so humbly and sweetly she tells him everything and here he is putting up pretences due to his guilt.

And as for servant employer thing,this is the reality. They were still friends but ofcourse,in real life even that would rarely happen.

Dadiji is so smart..m counting on her. 8-)


Edited by Anupama. - 15 April 2013 at 3:59am

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Great update! You update so promptly. Big smile
Coming to the story, it was so heartbreaking.
They had such fond memories of their innocent early years.
I have read such real life stories too when the innocent Kids have grown up to ignore each other due to social acceptance.

Dadi is so intelligent and bright. Probably the only one left.
So Anjali had stopped bonding with her?
May Dadi live long enough to see his kids.
The sunrise and their rooms facing each other. Sigh khushi remembers everything. The ending was like facing reality for her.

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:23am | IP Logged
It's quite troubling...I just hope Khushi was not abused as a child...

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Read part 3 nd 4...

loved it like always...Big smile  
its weired to see Khushi working like servant for Arnav... Ouch  but i loved thre cute frndship...Embarrassed
Arnav's Dadi seems interesting... LOL  i like her...Wink  you beautifully described the sun rise...Clap


 i love you writing.. Day Dreaming
i can wait for the climax to cum to knw the "past"..i am in no hurry... LOL

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:31am | IP Logged
beautiful update...
poor khushi, she really miss her best friend...

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Posted: 15 April 2013 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by molten_lava

Originally posted by Agathe

Btw I know you won't reveal anything soon, but I didn't expect you to reveal the dark secret only in the climax ShockedShocked

So no fight sequence in the climax CryLOL
Just kidding Wink


Yes, it will be revealed only in the climax because history will be repeating once again. And Arnav will get a chance to redeem himself from his guilt. Like I said before, I plan the end of the story even before the beginning. I don't drag the FF unnecessarily and I felt the dark past revelation would pave way for the end of the FF.

yes, there won't be a fight sequence physically in the climax!Wink But there will be one hell of a verbal fight and lots of tears and drama for sure.Wink

I've already guess it with the FF presentation LOLLOL

history will be repeating ShockedShockedShocked
Now this FF is growing on me WinkWink

waiting Big smile

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