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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 5)

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Agathe

Originally posted by Nichuss

Originally posted by Agathe

- Mussoorie : at first I thought that it's a person name SillySilly this place was used in mirage too..there khushi meets arnie again...frm thr she starts feeling for arnie..Embarrassed
It's the first time I hear about this town !! Do you have any reason for choosing this city ?? I guess so WinkWink
 
- Arnav's not at all like the Arnav we met in the show not like OUR gangster Arnav ApproveApprove yup...arnie here is totally different
 
Oh when Arnav had started to seduce La ??
But I still can't remember the name LOLLOL
 
What a lovely link with Mirage EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

i remember each n every scene of mirage,...

it was so close to me...

bike riding...Blushing

carnival... 

amans death made me realy teary...just hoped he will be safe...Cry

and final the epilogue...

arnie kickbox master...Wink

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molten_lava

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:21am | IP Logged
awsome as alwaysss...good to see u back! 
pls continue soon...cant wait for them to meeett... Embarrassed

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Anything written by you is a pure delight to read

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by molten_lava

Originally posted by Agathe

Finally have read the chapter !!

Things I've noted :
 
- Dark secret from childhood : seems quite interesting, and knowing you a bit, I think you're not going to reveal it soon !! So I don't think I'll try to guess it LOLLOL
 
- Mussoorie : at first I thought that it's a person name SillySilly
It's the first time I hear about this town !! Do you have any reason for choosing this city ?? I guess so WinkWink
 
- Arnav's not at all like the Arnav we met in the show not like OUR gangster Arnav ApproveApprove
 
- Ma, Anjali, Dad, Dadi, Nani, Mama, MANORAMA Mama, Akash, Chachas ... God they're all here ... this is going to be family filled FF  Big smileBig smile
 
- I already Love Mami !! Well I always loved her LOLLOL
 
- Rapheal Singh Raizada : I was like 'what an unusual name' LOLLOL But now I understand better why  !!
Raphael ... EmbarrassedEmbarrassed 
 
- Claire : French name, I liike it EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
- three eighths British ... LOL you know I hate maths, then WHY ?? LOLLOL You have insisted in the fact that he has British roots ... mmmh Wink
 
- Khushi, childhood friend ?? Where's she ??
 
Lovely update !! I think your style hasn't changed WinkWink
When will be the next update ?? Wednesday late night or Thurday early morning as before ?? LOLLOL
 
Waiting Waiting Waiting ...

1) Bumper prize goes to you for the first point!Party Ofcourse, the dark secret won't be revealed any time soon.Wink You can try guessing it, but it is going to be hard and shocking and might make you quite depressed. So you better stick to the positives of the story.LOL
2) Why Mussoorie? I heard it's a nice place and a perfect location for my story. Small town and hill sides and valleys!Wink sounds romantic right?really romantic place Blushing
3) Yes, it's a family filled FF because the dark secret when revealed will affect the entire family.
4) Why Raphael and Claire? because I wanted something different in this FF and thought of using some famous Indian history in the story. BTW, Mussoorie is a famous colonial British themed town.Thumbs Up loved the place the style of mansion...
5) Doesn't three eighths British sound hot?Wink
6) Where is Khushi? hmm... she's somewhere there, climbing up some hill of Mussoorie and Arnav will meet her in the next chapter!Winkthat means the girl who called out is not khushi...Shocked oh i thought she was khushi Tongue

Next update will be soon. It's ready actually. Maybe tomorrow afternoon or night.

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:24am | IP Logged
Glad to have you back.
superb updt
luvd it
updt soon

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Welcum back...When i read mirage first thing came to my mind was how can you write it perfectly...i am so happy you are back to entertain us wid your work...a very nice start...update soon because i want to where has khushi gone or she still lives dere...

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:32am | IP Logged
omg im totally intrigued by this new ff!!!!!totally awesome chapter...i wonder...well i will keep wondering until u update the next chapter LOLLOLLOLLOLlol...magnificent writing!!!!totally intense and emotional from what icaan see so far!!!!!lovely!!!and whose the child??mmm

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:39am | IP Logged
welcome back... Hug

i was not expecting the story so soon... it's a surprise but definitly a pleasant surprise...

now i hate that am late... 

after reading your golden rules am unhappy because i will be able to read it once a week... so i would really appriciate if you tell me the exact two days for your updates... please i want an easy stalking this time... no late night updates Ermm

i have read onlt Mussoorie... and you know what... i have once watched a serial named Massoorie... and i used to have a great admiration for it's hero... you have actully given me three reason's to read this FF
1) it's from my fav writer
2) it's about Arnav Khushi
3) Mussoorie

will comment as soon as i read it 

but trust me i will certainly find some reason to love this piece of yours Tongue

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