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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 41)

esamoe Goldie
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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 11:52am | IP Logged
fabulous update. Love the banner.
wow they had the cutest of nicknames.
the flashback was so sweet and cute were Arnav said " Why are you the servant? You should also been the Queen. I have read Kings have more than one Queens. Anjali is my sister Queen and you are my 'Queen' Queen"
Feel so sad for Khushi been so young and have indeed turned out to be their servant wonder what she has been through all these years.

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shr1234 Senior Member
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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
A glisten in my eyes... It's the fate and also the harsh reality out there, not every time a maid becomes princess. Kukku and Annyavv may turn into a servant girl and Chotey Saab. But hey, that's why we have fictions, no, to find our respite, to keep the hopes alive that, yes, there are real Cindrellas too!
Fabulous update, waiting for more :)

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mysterious_maze Goldie
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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
nice updateSmile
thanks for the pmWink
update soon Tongue



just kidding LOL

okay now here is the sahi wala comment Big smile


first of all whoever made that banner or whatever... i loved it... the kids are too cute and adorable...

Arnav seemed confused... he wants her memories to linger but doesn't want her around him... she is certainly important to him... she was important to him fifteen years ago and it doesn't change a bit after all those years... ryt???? bu what those memories are about??? why didn't Arnav help her???? didn't she need his help??? anyway am sure the past will be something interesting...

all in all a nice chapter... smooth and kind of sweet... specially the flash backs... but the bestest part was my queen queen... and that kukku was also the sweetest nick for Khushi...

but why Khushi always has to be orphan???

keep up the good work... and thanks a ton for mentioning time and date for the next update... it is really helpful




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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
btw i am curious about one thing??? does your every single story has to have lilies??? LOL

use some roses too LOL

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rajvta Senior Member
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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
I am so happy that you have started a new ff. Welcome back.
I am a big fan  of your previous ff mirage and have read it couple of times back to back.
Was a silent reader and apologise for not appreciating you back then but will try to be regular wih my comments and appreciaion for this new ff.
 
Ready for the ride.   

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Aparamegha IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
what a brilliant story ..read all the chapters in one go...will eagerly wait for your next update 

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mysterious_maze

btw i am curious about one thing??? does your every single story has to have lilies??? LOL

use some roses too LOL

Because Lillies are just too beautiful and exquisite. not even roses can match them.Smile

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smarty94 Senior Member
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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
You are backkk u are backkk.. that's reason enough for me to start stalking alreadyyy ^_^

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