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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 4)

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Agathe

Finally have read the chapter !!

Things I've noted :
 
- Dark secret from childhood : seems quite interesting, and knowing you a bit, I think you're not going to reveal it soon !! So I don't think I'll try to guess it LOLLOL
 
- Mussoorie : at first I thought that it's a person name SillySilly
It's the first time I hear about this town !! Do you have any reason for choosing this city ?? I guess so WinkWink
 
- Arnav's not at all like the Arnav we met in the show not like OUR gangster Arnav ApproveApprove
 
- Ma, Anjali, Dad, Dadi, Nani, Mama, MANORAMA Mama, Akash, Chachas ... God they're all here ... this is going to be family filled FF  Big smileBig smile
 
- I already Love Mami !! Well I always loved her LOLLOL
 
- Rapheal Singh Raizada : I was like 'what an unusual name' LOLLOL But now I understand better why  !!
Raphael ... EmbarrassedEmbarrassed 
 
- Claire : French name, I liike it EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
- three eighths British ... LOL you know I hate maths, then WHY ?? LOLLOL You have insisted in the fact that he has British roots ... mmmh Wink
 
- Khushi, childhood friend ?? Where's she ??
 
Lovely update !! I think your style hasn't changed WinkWink
When will be the next update ?? Wednesday late night or Thurday early morning as before ?? LOLLOL
 
Waiting Waiting Waiting ...

1) Bumper prize goes to you for the first point!Party Ofcourse, the dark secret won't be revealed any time soon.Wink You can try guessing it, but it is going to be hard and shocking and might make you quite depressed. So you better stick to the positives of the story.LOL
2) Why Mussoorie? I heard it's a nice place and a perfect location for my story. Small town and hill sides and valleys!Wink sounds romantic right?
3) Yes, it's a family filled FF because the dark secret when revealed will affect the entire family.
4) Why Raphael and Claire? because I wanted something different in this FF and thought of using some famous Indian history in the story. BTW, Mussoorie is a famous colonial British themed town.
5) Doesn't three eighths British sound hot?Wink
6) Where is Khushi? hmm... she's somewhere there, climbing up some hill of Mussoorie and Arnav will meet her in the next chapter!Wink

Next update will be soon. It's ready actually. Maybe tomorrow afternoon or night.

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:07am | IP Logged
Nice start... ur writing is wonderful... Clap
will keep stalking... Wink 

P.S.: i have read ur FF Mirage on FB...its was beautiful... Big smile

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nichuss

Originally posted by Agathe

- Mussoorie : at first I thought that it's a person name SillySilly this place was used in mirage too..there khushi meets arnie again...frm thr she starts feeling for arnie..Embarrassed
It's the first time I hear about this town !! Do you have any reason for choosing this city ?? I guess so WinkWink
 
- Arnav's not at all like the Arnav we met in the show not like OUR gangster Arnav ApproveApprove yup...arnie here is totally different
 
Oh when Arnav had started to seduce La ??
But I still can't remember the name LOLLOL
 
What a lovely link with Mirage EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:08am | IP Logged
omg u r baakk
yaaayyy
i was a big fan of mirage too
remembr me?? lol its ok.
u forget to mention dis story vl b romantic too ryt??

prologue is intresting
cont soon

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:11am | IP Logged
OMG!!!!! Your back. I was not going to open the pm then i saw its from you and i opened it in a second. This is like happiest day in my life. Last yr around this time i had discovered mirage now this. Awesome welcome back. Missed yu to much. And this ff is jus superb :)

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:14am | IP Logged
BOOKMARKING JI!

HEARD A LOT ABOUT YOUR GRIPPING WRITING SKILLS!

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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:16am | IP Logged
starting itself is mystery...

the referring "she" ...i guess its khushi...

the dark past of khushi-and arnie...? Monkey Icons what will be that ...? Monkey Icons eager to know..

arnie enjoying the fresheness of mussorie...tat was cool..(it reminded me EHMMBH on the first sequences..tey travel to mussorie...its just awesome place...wish to go once there)

Hence, Mussoorie tasted like Mussoorie. Not Dehradun or Haridwar. But only Mussoorie.
nice comparison i liked it Monkey Icon Yoyo

 the wide gates opened to reveal a huge 19th Century pre-independence Colonial styled mansion perching beautifully amidst Mother Nature's blessings around her.
omg sounds like reaching some castle...Monkey Icon Yoyo

Ma,dad,dadi,nani,maami,maama,anji...a big family

wow so excited...Monkey Wink Yoyo

anji marriage going to happen...Monkey Icons Yoyo

why did he said he didnt wished to remind but his eyes saw the cottage (confused)...Monkey Emoticon Cici

"Annyaw" ...woh khon... did she called arnav or someone else...Monkey Icons

waiting for the next part for further clarifications 


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Posted: 08 April 2013 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Woah...m rubbing my eyes..to check wether m hallucinating or not...

So its confirmd ...u r back...love u nd u r works so much...
Dis ff had a wonderful start...
M a big mirage fan...its a complete film material..i wud definately try my best to recreate it onscreen ...wenever i ll do it...i ll tke u r due permission...currently m on my leave nd i hve to complete my MBA too...
Welcome back...:)
keep shining...

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