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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 34)

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Been waiting eagerly ... 

Loved the flashback into their childhood ... such cute memories ... 
they seemed inseparable ... Tongue  Kukku and Annyav ...  LOL

Wonder what went wrong fifteen years back that is making him feel guilty ...  

"he couldn't bear to see her face, to gaze into those warm hazel eyes, those innocent eyes which had once silently cried for help. He couldn't let her eyes meet the dark molten brown ones which had failed to protect his best friend..."

Waiting to read more ... thanks ... 


Edited by Kishmish - 12 April 2013 at 6:02am

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 5:23am | IP Logged
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OMMLJ (Oh My Molten_Lava Ji)

missed the first page by few seconds.

Wooh update was super awesome n cute. Finally you gave some Cute flashbacks of their childhood.

The King, Queen n Servant play was adorable n the way Annyav said that, Khushi too can be the Queen, bcuz Kings of ancient times had more than 1 Queen LOL baccha bada samajhdar hai Wink

Waiting for Monday ji

Love
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Edited by Sarunfanatic_Ji - 12 April 2013 at 5:50am

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 5:30am | IP Logged
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This will be my second comment on your work. I have read all your work as it was all finished work I just could not comment and I thought you have left the forum so I did not want to disturb you with PM as I wanted to respect your wishes to be left alone if you had left the forum. I don't know how to express how happy i am to have you back and writing this amazingly wonderful FF. I Absolutly love your style of writing and your way of story telling. Thank you for taking your valuable time in writing, please do carry on writing.
Coming to the chapter things are getting bit clear as to how Arnav and Khushi met and the social setup, I love the fact that the story is about their childhood too , that the chain of event starters when they were little.
Arnav is hiding from and he is uncomfortable around her , why? he blames himself for something happened to Khushi in the past where as Khushi is very comfortable with past and him does she not remember certain events or is her perception is different than of Arnav's , I guess we will have to wait patiently.
Things will get much more interesting when Lavanya comes from London. It might help Arnav to see bit more clearly as to what place Khushi holds in his life.
Will wait for Monday's update. Thank you for the update.


Edited by gifttag - 12 April 2013 at 6:18am

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 5:38am | IP Logged
another awesome updateSmile...too gud...

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Hey I remember your name...dont know if I have read mirage but might go back and check it out...but mostly i am hooked by your disclaimer now lets check out the story ...

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Hey welcome back...had missed ur stories. Nice to read another one. Read all chapters. It seems v interesting. Cant wait to know what happened bet arnav khushi..

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Was too good... So what was it that Arnav could'nt help Khushi from.. their first meet was cute and the King-Queen-Servant act was cuter... Loved it... So he just gave away and gave her a hint that he still remembered her... The pain and agony that runs through them were brought out so well... It was heart wrenching to know that their small kid act came true... Small things like how Arnav was behind his mother asking her not to leave him when he came to know that children can be without parents was so moving... Loved reading it in...

The family moments at lunch was so light hearted and wonderful... It was kind of relief para for an otherwise emotional update... So to me it was a mix and I Loved it...

Cant wait to read further... Hope we dont have a saturday and sunday in-between... and land up on monday straight to read chapter 4...

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