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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 23)

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Hello...
You may not know me coz I am a new reader of your FF... The title seemed interesting and hence I started to read and I'm liking your style... The story has a completely different background which is likable... Also the concept of the story drew my attention...
 
And searched your previous FF MIRAGE and had completed first 19 chapters... It has a totally different tensed atmosphere throughout and so different from the usual Arshi fictions...
 
I'm liking both of them... You are indeed an amazing writer...

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 8:02am | IP Logged
the story is getting more interesting...
loved how arnav recognized khushi by her eyes...i wonder what happened in their childhood...
arnav pretended 2 not recognize her even though she is the only thing he has been thinking abt since he arrived in mussoorie LOL...
hmmm...i smell deep mystery...Wink
whatever the mystery is plz do not unfold it soon...yeah i said not to unfold...LOL...i'm a huge fan of mystery stories...Big smile...i like it when it gets more nd more mysterious...

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
awesome update! Aww that's so cute that they were childhood friends. But why is Arnav all cold and indiferent now? I wonder what happened. Khushi seems like a happy and bubbly girl. I can't wait to read more about their past together!

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Big smile
"Her eyes!

He had seen them somewhere. They looked eerily familiar to him. And then, she had narrowed her eyes at him sceptically and he had instantly known where he had seen them.

Of course, he had spent five long years of his life with her and there was no way he could forget them..."

So finally 'Annyav' met the Khushi from his childhood ...
but behaved as though he did not know who she was ... Ouch
 
waiting to know why ???


Edited by Kishmish - 09 April 2013 at 8:37am

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Nice, so they have met again but Arnav is indifferent and cold towards her , interesting look forward to more..

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 8:31am | IP Logged
Nice update.Why did Arnav behave so weird with Khushi? Felt sad for her.

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 8:31am | IP Logged
oh u r back Tongue
Party
Dancing
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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 9:19am | IP Logged
How can i forget you...?? Shocked
MIRAGE is the most wonderful ff I have ever read...Heart and i'm planning to read it again after my exams... I actually forced my friends, who are not from IF, to read MIRAGE... and they loved it...Heart

i was grinning like a fool when i got your pm... thanks for coming back...Big smile

and i've already fallen in love with this ff... i know it's just the start but i had tears in my eyes because of his cold behavior towards khushi...Cry but i know he is holding himself... something drasting must have happened in the past... and after reading your last line it seems it has something to do with khushi and that time arnav was helpless and couldn't help help her... is he blaming himself now??? and may be that's why he was holding himself???

really curious to know what might have happened in the past...

will be waiting for the next update...SmileSmile

Edited by deepti1906 - 09 April 2013 at 9:23am

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