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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 17)

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Hi...

I am glad that you decided to come back with a story... I read Mirage after you've completed it...i.e, during the period you were inactive on IF... I loved that story very much.

Read the two chapters just now and I am already looking forward for this.
Liked this environment you gave with the story...
Eagerly waiting for the next update...

Sruthi...

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molten_lava

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 1:26am | IP Logged
I am a silent reader who has really enjoyed all your written work. You are a brilliant writer and I thought you have left the forum and I am sooo happy that you have started this FF. Just wanted to let you know.
Great start of another amazing story, I can't wait to read more. You have asked a Q that do we remember 'Mirage' now what kind of question is that ? can we ever forget that FF that is a masterpiece one of the kind, unforgettable.
So what have we got here almost British Raizada who is called 'chote Saab' and he already have a girlfriend but he is not in love with her. Khushi comes from a poor family compared to his almost royal family. Arnav is pretending not to remember her...interesting, can't wait for all to unfold slowly.
Will be waiting for the next chapter eagerly.
Thank you for starting yet another lovely story.


Edited by gifttag - 09 April 2013 at 1:36am

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 1:31am | IP Logged
I have read Mirage and loved it. Didn't know you had started another story. Just read both the chapters. Loved the stoy set in the backdrop of Mussourie. Waiting for the 12th to read more.

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 1:33am | IP Logged
I loved mirage and your os specially about nine month old Arush...I am really excited to read another story ...it seems very interesting...Smile

Edited by tashi26 - 09 April 2013 at 1:34am

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 1:37am | IP Logged
did he hallucinate the girl calling "Annyav " in last part Wacko

arnie is in relation with lavanya...D'oh..wht abt khushi... Ouch

anji -arnie convo...gud

arnie dad-arnie convo--lukd like army senior -junior convoSilly

nainaji- arthurji emotional convo regarding arnie made me feel sadOuch

arthurji..as a father says tey will get thr old arnie backConfused

as a business and army man says no ...(lets see...khushi may bring arnie back Wink)

arshi meet...finally Embarrassed

khushi recognised arnie...her "Chotey sahab"Tongue

y arnie lied her he didnt knw herShocked something fishy Tongue

khushi sad hearing that... hmmOuch

something made arnie think abt pain...whts the mystery Shocked

wow...u started with ur mystery...

cant guess ur ff upcoming at all Confused

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waiting for next update Day Dreaming

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 1:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ankitachoudhury

reswaaaEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

anki u got first place Shocked

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Awesome ff.

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 1:42am | IP Logged

Beautiful Update :D

When u said Arnav,Khushi shares dark past I thought its their families involved.Right now also its not very clear,but looks like it was only these two involved.

Arnav's indifferent behaviour must have hurt her badly.But why is he doing it?there must be something solid behind it.


Eagerly,waiting for next update.:D

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