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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 153)

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
Wow that was a fantastic and superb update, written perfectly. 

I'm loving Vij his plan to explore mousorrie and he wanted to take Arnav and Khushi as the tour guide as well, loved Dadi ji agreeing to taking khushi and I love the way they both cornered her the kitchen to make her agree. 

I hope Vij plays Cupid and it started in the car as he made khushi sit at the front, loved when they shared the story regarding what happened with Arnav when they went on the picnic, it was so funny. 

It so sad when khushi shares information about her past and how she kept busy when Arnav was not around, especially the part where she told Arnav the reason why she did not make any new friends. 

Wow loved the hug at the end, Arnav finally realised he needed to offer khushi emotional support as a friend and she probably needs someone to let out her heart break and share her sorrow with. 

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx 

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 6:20am | IP Logged
thnks for the link dear...

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Wow what an update! The story is becoming so addictive. Looks like both RK and dadi are carrying out a secret mission to get Arhi together. Totally loved the way RK ditched the passenger seat just to give an opportunity for the other couple to have some bonding time. Khushi's pain was explained really nicely, and the way she has adopted to the loneliness and changed herself is just so painful can't even imagine been that lonely in life. 

Hug was just magical!! Arnav was trying to take away all the pain, she has kept to herself for the past 15 years and Khushi was both sad about the way things have turned out in her life and happy for getting back her best friend. It was a fantastic update! 

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 9:54am | IP Logged
Nice srory.

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 5:10am | IP Logged
What an awesome update...
I love the 2 cupids Dadi and Ranvijay.
And yah i have formed my opinion about Ranvijay, i love him.. BAS.

And they hug Day Dreaming aww..
Waiting to read chapter 10 desperately now.

Liza

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Dear i very well remember u n ur mirage...how can we forget u???even u told something like ur family is having some underworld background ryt:-)...mirage was such an amazing story n i stil adore that gangster arnav n khushi..i just found dis new 1,n read in one go...loved it...will be in for the entire ride...

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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Rachel,

This is another beautiful and exquisitve piece of literature by you. You are a marvelous writer. One that always spellbind your readers with your every word. I am loving this FF as much as Mirage. The plot is intriguing and the characters are phenomenal. It's endearing to know that Khushi waited 15 years for her best friend to come back to her and finally her prayers are anwsered. It was heartbreaking to see Arnav avoid her for the first couple of days but no one can resist her charm and innocence for too long. I'm loving the childhood flashbacks of Arshi.

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Hey,
Congrats for an awesome beginningSmileClap! THOSE BEAUTIFUL CHILDHOOD MEMORIES, SPECIALLY THOSE WHICH REMINDED HIM OF HIS CUTE COMPANION- you have hit one of the longest sixes of the current IPL ClapClap U are a genuinely sweet person and a wonderfully gifted writer... the concluding line of Chapter1 and that "Annyav..." was so touchingEmbarrassedEmbarrassed a fully grown guy like me felt the heart strings being tugged in oh so a subtle manner..my heart melted at A's reminiscences of fifteen years backOuchOuchAn excellent start..though a touch late to remark thus..Thanx     

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