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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 147)

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
superb updt
 
updt soon

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
So Ranvijay trying to play matchmaker!! Hopefully he's not evil after all!

Thanks for the quick updates!! I'm sure it takes up a lot of time, but it's very appreciated!

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
Fabulous, Keep writing...

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 4:03pm | IP Logged

Chapter 7

Rannvijay apologizing to Khushi was so unexpected and at first I thought it was Arnav who was waiting to talk to Khushi. 

Khushi cherished every single thing associated for fifteen long years'that shows how their friendship really meant to her. She even went to church every Sunday just for him. She is relieved to know that he at least remembers their friendship.

I don't who I feel sorrier for, Khushi who thinks her friend is ashamed to acknowledge her because of status or Arnav who went away from his best friend for the guilt he feels and now he's feeling even worse after knowing how Khushi held on to their memories.

Beautifully written.Clap


Chapter 8

OMG !! The flashback was just so funny and cute. I totally love little Arnav and Khushi.

"Mussoorie Bhains! Run faster! Otherwise that Pagal Kuttha will bite your bum."ROFL 

This is epic.Clap

The comparison by little Khushi just to explain to Arnav that he's becoming lazy was superb. Big smile  Simple explanation...something only a child would think of. 

You really have a way with words and you just know how to bring out the simplicity and innocence. Clap

Finally Arnav is opening up to Khushi. Now coming to Rannvijay, I think he's an adventurous sort of a guy and the fact that he's noticed the undercurrents between Arnav and Khushi, is completely thrilling to him. Embarrassed

Amazing chapter.ClapClap


Chapter 9

So Rannvijay is playing cupid. Arnav and Khushi really needed this push. It was cute how he and Dadi blackmailed Khushi into going with them. Dadi seems to be quite fond of Khushi. I wonder what's on her mind. Does she realize the depth of Khushi's feelings for Arnav? Embarrassed

The 'menage a trois' part was so funny. ROFL

Rannvijay'.nice plan to give these two the much needed alone time.Big smile

Poor Khushi, she learned to play chess all by her and she didn't even make any other friends all these years. Arnav has a lot to make up for.

Aww'they finally hugged and Arnav felt the tug. EmbarrassedSmile

Fabulous update'can't wait to read the next chapter. Clap

 



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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
I loved the update...this feeling that as come to Arnav I hope he pursues it ...it will help him to get over the guilt I feel...he should just follow his heart...like this Hug...fantastic...

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
Big smile I was like that when u surprise me with ur wonderful update
Cry I was like that when I read that khushi was playing alone cuz she didn't have any body to play with
Wink awesome MR CUPID oh I mean RK ,  good job man
Embarrassed I was like that when I read there first ,GROWN UP HUG , much needed
Clap and this is for u my dear writer for fab update
Star u r my star dear writer , plz plz update next chapter soon
I hope arnav is not going to regret and ignore this new feeling ,
Angry and if u did arnav then I will simply  kill u


Edited by samirao - 28 April 2013 at 4:48pm

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
Awesome update 
Just loved it 
Now I think Vij is a good person and he is trying to make arnav and khushi best frnds again 
Hope them they become best frnds again and more then best frnds
 update soon

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
I really like Dadiji and right now I am loving RK too no matter whats his intentions are for future. He seems very suspicious to me Wink Glad to know, Arnav realized that his guilt is not above her pain and hope he tries to erase it and yaayy, finally they hugged. A small step for a bright future and I know since its your story, you will throw so many shocking surprises (totally unexpected) to make this bright future pretty hard to achieve LOLLOL Super duper awesome update, just prefect. Loved it!  

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