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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 146)

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Another Emotional chapter...
 
So Ranvijay is trying to play cupid...Is dadi trying to help him too?
 
You have penned Khushi's pain...her lonliness...Arnav's guilt beautifully...
 
Its just the start of a beautiful relationship...
 
Update soon...

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
I have an xam tmrw bt read all the parts at 1 go..such was the magnetic pull towards the story..
I have always been a silent reader but ur story moved me to tears nd forced me to cmnt,how 1 incident cud change everything in life,its heartwrenching..
U r an amazing writer nd the story uptill now has been written in the most beautiful manner possible:-))..
Waiting for future updates..
Nd once again i say u've done a brilliant job *applause*

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
as i thought  look like ranvijays  is not bad...  arnav started to feel something for khushi...and lavanya coming...wow...loved it 

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
Hi,

I liked the surprise. Will you update again tomorrow...I am getting so greedy Embarrassed

RK what's going on in his mind. Is he trying to bring Arnav and Khushi together? Is he the one who saw them hiding behind the bushes? I mean if Arnav and Khushi spend time together then they will get attracted to each other and I worry if Arnav's family will ever accept Khushi. Is RK really playing some game...I feel something is cooking in his mind Ouch

The trip was nice and Khushi knows the meaning but I had google it to find what that word meant Blushing LOL Their first hug...atleast after they turned adults Big smile I have a feeling that Khushi may not reciprocate the feelings you know...she may keep her distance because Arnav had left her earlier what will happen if he repeats that again. I don't think she will ready for a heartbreak again Cry 

Pls cont soon...

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
ranvijay wants them to be together...Shocked

so the attraction begins...Dancing

khushi is so broken cuz of a childhood freindship...its so sad...
looking forward to future updates...

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
Lovely update.

Ranvijay has decided to play Cupid... And he is successesful... the opportunity presented to Arnav and Khushi in a calm atmosphere... no hurry for eigther of them to go any where... all thanks to Ranvijay... they managed to bridge the relation of friendship and on the way started something much more than that.

Arnav offered financial help... will Khushi take it, remains to be seen... but the question is does Arnav wants to help Khushi get another job and leave the cottege and relocate somewhere else?

Arnav has started taking steps in over coming his guilt and has decided to move on as Khushi has... good because nothing can be achieved by living in past and thinking about 'what if'. One can only get answers from with in rather than outside. He is also learning a valuable lesson from Khushi of acceptance ... Of good or bad.

It was very nice to see all four of them going out together... Ranvijay is not a snob of so called high society and invited Khushi to come out with them... since this character has come in the story I liked him... could sense hidden depth.

Love the relation Khushi has with Arnav's dadi... we are getting to know about it in bits and pieces... In time hopefully will get to know more.

The flash backs of Arnav and khushi are so cute... it's always a pleasure to read them... the fun they had... the bond they shared.

It was a real fun filled chapter with lovely emotions and Ranvijay was the real hero of this chapter... as he gets the credit for making the understanding between Arnav and Khushi possible by providing the right opportunity and relaxed atmosphere , I think I have started repeating myself as I was so impressed with Ranvijay that I will just stop.

Thanks for another surprise update.



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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
ranjivay seems good, really want it to remain so!
arnav khushi:)

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
Loved the update... even more loved that it was earlier than expected...
They had so much fun filled childhood...
Arnav finally gave into her pain realizing his guilt is lesser than her pain...
I have a feeling that Dadi wants Arnav and Khushi together... well at least like friends as before...

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