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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 135)

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Awsome update...dog part was super funny. Wow 1st eyelock!! m loving rk :)

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Yeah this update indeed brought a smile on my face..the way arnav&kushi sinking back to their cute childhood memories and reliving it is adorable..
For some reasons me to have negative vibes for rk.. Confused

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 9:17am | IP Logged
I love this fiction...its amazing and quiet different frm others...!! read all d chapters just nw...!!

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
I just caught up with all the parts, and my oh my, what a beautiful story you are weaving.

Its wonderful to the see Arnav and Khushi trying to pick things up from where they left off 15 years ago, but there are so many road blocks ahead.

I feel Khushi knows that he had seen her getting molested or sexually abused all those years ago, as opposed to Arnav's thinking that she is unaware about it all.

I also feel she is not blocking it all out, or has forgotten it all as Arnav thinks she has. She remembers all right. That much is apparent.

Anyway, I will stop with the assumptions, its your story, and I will let you tell it, 'cause you do a pretty darn awesome job of telling it anyway! :)

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 10:53am | IP Logged
I like surprises. Thanks for the early update.Big smile

And yes, i like the pagal kutha and the mussoorie bhains part. LOL
I like how you weave in the childhood memories along with the present. 
It used to have huge contrast between past and present.
But you changed it slightly when he shouted back the same line he used in the past.

And i liked the symbolism you used when the darkness envelopes him and he is all alone. She then comes back and tends to his wounds and the sunlight is back (:



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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 11:42am | IP Logged
woah woah! Two updates.. hmm.. yay..
Gonna read.. btw new thread coming for next updte.. hai na? ;)

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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
excited to know their past... so finally Arnav came out of his shell. I guess that the other pair of eyes were RANVIJAY's...
awesome and lovely update... thanks for this lovely update...
waiting 4 the next.


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Posted: 26 April 2013 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
distance btwn arshi reducing...food sign

wht hapnd 15 yrs before...?

big mystery

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