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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 129)

wonderblake IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Totally loved the update, there were surprises within the surprise.
I don't like Lavanya coming early, but I would love to RK play cupid to Arnav and Khushi.

A light, pleasant, beautiful update.
Waiting for chapter 9.

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luvbug IF-Dazzler

Joined: 09 October 2012
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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Awe I'm in love with this story :D

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Kishmish IF-Rockerz

Joined: 08 February 2012
Posts: 5325

Posted: 27 April 2013 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by molten_lava

Originally posted by Agathe

137 Evil SmileEvil Smile
Next chapter in a new tread ??? Evil Smile

Nope. In this thread only. Next thread only when this thread crosses 150.LOL

It is fast approaching 150 ... LOL LOL LOL

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melonie IF-Rockerz

Joined: 07 September 2006
Posts: 6637

Posted: 27 April 2013 at 10:19am | IP Logged

Beautiful updates :D I just can't get enough of their childhood flashbacks yaar. You write them exceptionally well. Clap

I am in two minds about RK. He is kinda confusing ok. He apologized was fine but can't really understand his intentions.

Arnav and Khushi attending the mass and their little talk after was really heartwarming. I was moved to tears hearing Khushi say she would pray and attend mass just so that Arnav would be back and when he came back he pretended that he doesn't know her. That's so painful. I really feel bad for Khushi but I love her spirits she has really come a long way. I really wish she gets all the happiness :D

Who was that watching them with a's a man..interesting.

Pls cont soon...

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amaypranay IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Looking forward to reading this one...loved Mirage...

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P4rveen12 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 01 June 2012
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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Wow that was amazing and brilliant update, written perfectly. 

Awww i loved the part where Arnav watched khushi being chased by the dogs and Arnav laughing was amazing, i loved what he said to khushi that was so funny and hilarious ""Mussoorie Bhains! Run faster! Otherwise that Pagal Kuttha will bite your bum." 

Loved the flashback both Arnav and khushi at the field looking at the Bhains, he used the same dialogue then as he used now in the present. 

The garden scene was really lovely, its so nice that both Arnav and khushi are getting on so well, he even let her choose the flowers for the wedding. Khushi was so concerned when she realised he had not changed his wound. 

The flash again was so sweet, khushi crying looking at Arnav's wound, he forgot he was in pain and starting consoling khushi. 

I wonder who has seen them at the end, please continue soon xx 

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-Viji- IF-Dazzler

Joined: 02 January 2012
Posts: 4134

Posted: 27 April 2013 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Hey Finally caught up with ur story in one goSmileA very big fan of ur mirage and nw read thisSmile
Such a beautifull story with great characterisationsSmile
The way u potray Arnav and Khushi...SuperbClap
Loving the way their relationship is heading towardsSmile
RK...seems to be a nice guyWinkLets cWink
So eagerly waiting for the next partsSmile

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amaypranay IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Read all the episodes in one go...amazingly written and a very deep intense love story...loving it thoroughly...

only Arnav can fight his guilt...I think the day he confesses to Khushi ...he will feel as a huge burden is off his shoulders...but it has to come from him...

I think it's going to be an outburst from his's been building up in him for the past 15 years...what a story...!

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