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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 117)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 11:36am | IP Logged
loved it...

it was soo emotional tht i can't stop my tears...

really khushi's description for the wait she did for her best friend...was really soo good...

superb one...

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Wonderful Update TongueTongue


First part 
Reading the first line, I immediately realize it was RK LOLLOL
How ?? Audemars Piguet WinkWink
and then also the way you wrote ... without revealing who it was, creating a tensed climate !!
and all that in 8 lines ClapClapClap

So finally RK isn't that bad WinkWink
You already said it, and I guessed it too, but it feels good LOLLOL
Seems like he's going to play a role in Arnav and Khushi love story ... but a passive role EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
I liiike it, ahaan EmbarrassedEmbarrassed 


Second part 
Arnav late at Church ?? and no place to seat ?? not really listening to the sermon ??
It reminds me of someone LOLLOL

OOOH Khushi was there !! I honestly didn't expect that ShockedShocked
From there it became very interesting !!! 
She isn't christian, but she has decided to find God's loves by any way ?? 
Does she feel guilty because of what happened in the past  ?? 
She's asking for forgiveness ?? 

That's what I thought first, but then the reasons she gave to Arnav were ... silly just like she said !
I feel like she lives only for Arnav ConfusedConfused

But I think she didn't tell him the whole matter ! My humble opinion !

I think Arnav is a bit egocentric !! He saw Khushi had pain in her eyes and he immediately thought that it was because of him !! Confused
It may be sth else : Khushi is poor, has no family except her old Buaji ...why did he immediately think that it was because him ?? ConfusedConfused
Yeah I know each time Arnav talks with her, or hear sth related to her it's more about him and her than her alone, but ... I think it's a immature from him!


I like the way Khushi asked directly if he was ashamed to be her friend, and didn't like the way Arnav changed the subject AngryAngry 
But the FB was cute !!
And I noticed that till now all the FB were on Arnav's point of view !! Right ?? 
Why ?? any reasons ?? Is it to show that Arnav reminds what happened while Khushi lives with it ?? 

Then he didn't say sorry !!! ConfusedConfused

What you wrote after was really interesting ... I don't have anything to point out because each word seems important ! Wink


The last part was cute !! and made smile just like Khushi !!
Yeah Arnav you're stupid, no doubt about that LOLLOL


This Chapter was very interesting but confusing LOLLOL







Edited by Agathe - 24 April 2013 at 12:27pm

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
atlast some arshilious chapter ..

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Agathe

Wonderful Update TongueTongue


First part 
Reading the first line, I immediately realize it was RK LOLLOL
How ?? Audemars Piguet WinkWink
and then also the way you wrote ... without revealing who it was, creating a tensed climate !!
and all that in 8 lines ClapClapClap

So finally RK isn't that bad WinkWink
You already said it, and I guessed it too, but it feels good LOLLOL
Seems like he's going to play a role in Arnav and Khushi love story ... but a passive role EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
I liiike it, ahaan EmbarrassedEmbarrassed 


Second part 
Arnav late at Church ?? and no place to seat ?? not really listening to the sermon ??
It reminds me of someone LOLLOL

OOOH Khushi was there !! I honestly didn't expect that ShockedShocked
From there it became very interesting !!! 
She isn't christian, but she has decided to find God's loves by any way ?? 
Does she feel guilty because of what happened in the past  ?? 
She's asking for forgiveness ?? 

That's what I thought first, but then the reasons she gave to Arnav were ... silly just like she said !
I feel like she lives only for Arnav ConfusedConfused

But I think she didn't tell him the whole matter ! My humble opinion !

I think Arnav is a bit egocentric !! He saw Khushi had pain in her eyes and he immediately thought that it was because of him !! Confused
It may be sth else : Khushi is poor, has no family except her old Buaji ...why did he immediately think that it was because him ?? ConfusedConfused
Yeah I know each time Arnav talks with her, or hear sth related to her it's more about him and her than her alone, but ... I think it's a immature from him!


I like the way Khushi asked directly if he was ashamed to be her friend, and didn't like the way Arnav changed the subject AngryAngry 
But the FB was cute !!
And I noticed that till now all the FB were on Arnav's point of view !! Right ?? 
Why ?? any reasons ?? Is it to show that Arnav reminds what happened while Khushi lives with it ?? 

Then he didn't say sorry !!! ConfusedConfused

What you wrote after was really interesting ... I don't have anything to point out because each word seems important ! Wink


The last part was cute !! and made smile just like Khushi !!
Yeah Arnav you're stupid, no doubt about that LOLLOL


This Chapter was very interesting but confusing LOLLOL






No, you are reading too much between the lines. Why would Khushi feel guilty? She hasn't done anything wrong. Her conscience is clear. It's just that when she had no one else in her life, she turned to God to bring back that one friend who meant everything to her. She was so naive that inspite of not being a christian, she thought if she would pray to 'his' God, she would get him back.
And yes, somewhere, she does live only for Arnav. She has difficulty in letting go of people or rather Arnav from her life.

Yes, Arnav is kind of ego centric and thinks only about him. Why else do you think he thought his guilt is more than her pain? Arnav is also a flawed human being and this is his weakness in his character.

Yes. Correctly pointed out. She is still living those memories, while he only remembers it. That's why it's entirely from Arnav's POV. I'm not going to reveal what exactly is going on in her head so soon. I want to preserve it for the climax.Wink So until then, you have to adjust with only Arnav's POV of the story.

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
wonderful chapter...loved it
will wait for the next update

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
Really good FF. can't wait for the next update.

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
the best part of this ff are the flashbacks...annyav and kuku were so dman adorable!!!!Hug
its sad that she thinks it's all because of the class difference...i just hope arnav knows what he has to do next...

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Finally Arnav acknowledged he remembers her...he really needs to accept the past if he wants to move forward. I get that there is a lot of guilt inside him, but he needs to get over it...and making amends one step at a time might help him!

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