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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 115)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
felt so bad for Khushi.. hope Arnav atleast talks about what is bothering him..

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Awesome. The baby steps that both especially Arnav is taking towards reacquainting is very nicely written and truly heartwarming.
Try as he might, he cannot stay away from her. 

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:05am | IP Logged
So the stir is getting very interesting so poor thing has been waiting and waiting and waiting and praying and praying for him and he is been feeling guilty and guilty 
Oh my god I hope they both can make amends...

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Nice chapter! Finally they took one step ahead in friendship...i have a feeling she remembers what happened to her...but doesnot wanna remember...or maybe she doesn't  know he has seen her...hmmm...

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by penny25

nice update...

i lyk d fact RK cleared d air..thou for a min i thought it was arnav...i feel he may be d catalyst dat brings dem closer...:)

nd den d mass tym...arnav obviously craves her presence...nd dats why he finds an unknown peace in her company ..i lyk d church nd d mass bckround...d prayer was sweet...

felt very low for khushi while readin bout her wait..bout her trust in god dat will make arnav return to her...nd now wen he is here den he is regfusin to recognise her...:'( nd d secnd reason seems apparent to khushi now bcoz RK too confirmed it to her...:'(..

i know arnav has lived in guilt for 15yrs...but atleast he has enjpyed his life in meanwhole whereas khushi...slowly nd slwly...d title of d stry is bcomin more fitin...:)

d last part bout u explainin d guilt was nice...leart a lot bout human emotions from it...:)

one question wat shud i call u???
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I see you are commenting regularly and that too long comments.LOL I officially like you.Tongue
My name is Rachel, but you can call me whatever you want.Smile

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:41am | IP Logged
OMG, such a wonderful update, liked the fact that RK waited and apologized to her, and he is trying to gauge the feelings and emotions of the three people and mostly Arnav and Khushi for each other, wonderful

Loved the pace it is going, truly did not expect Arnav to start trying to make amends, first step to a long journey. 

He is burning in his own guilt , I can see it thorough your words. In the last update you mentioned Arnav was enjoying his life when she was waiting here for the last 15 years, did not seem like it. He was getting buried with guilt and it is eating him from the inside. 

She does not know that he saw what happened on that fateful day, I am guessing she wanted to be supported by her friends especially Annyav..., but he left. 

She is truly a butterfly as you show her different vibes and colors. Dadi was there to guide her all the 15 years, thank you for that. 

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Loved it
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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:50am | IP Logged
I really really enjoy reading this work.  You make every moment that these two share so very memorable and it has a reason and a history behind it.  Just really deep and meaningful. THe moment in the church where he sits next to her, something so natural but for them so very important, and awkward.  The connection these two share so marred by a guilt that I look forward to reading about.  

Thanks for sharing.


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