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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 114)

Breath-Mark IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 7:12am | IP Logged
I wanna punch my fist in the air and scream out loud! *excited*
Haha, great update. Esp the last part and the church scene.
I was so happy that she sat with him thoroughout. And she did express that she was lonely all these years. Plus, she kept insisting that he forgot her as her best friend. 
I am glad that he did some amends. Can't wait for the next update. 

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asthagarwal IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 7:17am | IP Logged
I luvd d church part, it ws soothing 4 sure... Bt I'm really happy dat he finally opened up... Smile

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msin IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 7:29am | IP Logged
I liked it.. Good Arnav is kukku.. That he remembers...but I am very uneasy about the past that Khushi may not remember... It's scary.,,child abuse disturbs me deeply..

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 7:38am | IP Logged
I was feeling bad for kushi when she asks him whether he distancing her from him is due to the status differnent btwn them..cant you see how much hurting she arnav?i adores her will power,strength.. after all the things she had gone through in her life the way she deals with her life is simply incredible..

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..mrinalini.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 7:40am | IP Logged
The innocence and the subtlety of this story is so riveting.Arnav and Khushi are not "Annyav" and "Kukku" anymore but somehow that innocence still lingers on.Their interactions are intense,their gestures are subtle yet there is a sweet child like innocence-in both of them.

RK is giving me creeps.I don't like him,period!!He's over-enthusiastic(and not in a good way) about ArHi.Me don't likeyStern Smile

Hoping for more ArHi interactions.First steps towards making amends has been successfully taken.Will be waiting for moreDay Dreaming

Update soonHug

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musicfan5 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 7:45am | IP Logged
Emotional Update...
Thank God RK apologised...I had started to think that he is like Shyam but no...he apologised to khushi for his behaviour and also realised the bond between Arnav and Khushi...
Arnav Khushi convo tugged my heart...khushi telling Arnav why she went to church...She prayed for 15 yrs for him to come back to her and when he did come back after such a long time and met for the first time he told her he didn't remember must have broken her heart...
It is heart wrenching that she thinks he is distancing himself and pretending to not remember due to her social status and he is doing it out of tremendous guilt...not being able to face her...
Getting more and more curious abt what had happened 15 yrs back...Arnav thinking reminding her of it is like opening Pandora's box and everything is ok only because of his silence...Why?
Has Khushi really moved on from that incident or has she blocked it in her mind due to shock and cannot recall it now...
End of this chapter was adorable though...Just Kukku and Annyav smiling at each other...

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_disha_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Omg what a tease you are ... I was thinking it was Arnav apologizing and it turned out to be RK.
So i am thinking RK is not all that bad anymore !!LOL

Arnav and Khushi and Annyav and Kukku ... such a contrast they are and like always you bring out the past and present with such grace with emotions in a cross fire !

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meera06 Goldie

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
I was actually surprised to see that Ranvijay apologized to Khushi..
You made me cry when Khushi was talking to Arnav..All these years she has  been waiting for Arnav and went to church just for him ...I'm glad that finally Arnav acknowledged the fact that he does remember Khushi..

Was Khushi molested 15 years back and maybe Arnav saw and knew the person(Probably from their own family)and he was unable to protect her at that time??I know you are going to reveal the truth slowly but couldn't stop myself from making assumptions!

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