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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 113)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 6:21am | IP Logged

It was nice update ... So ranvij  said soory to khuhsii it was unexpected so early i was thinkig first its arnav ...
Church scene was nice  finally he start doing amendemnt Smile
Whatever happend he knows but didnt tell anay one that he saw somthing?????
Hope he comeover from guilt  soon 
Continue soon pls
Thanks for updating

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Updated on Page 112 Smile

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 6:37am | IP Logged
superb update. a baby step towards amends.great.what has happened to khushi in the past.eager to know yaar

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 6:53am | IP Logged
wonderful update...SmileSmile and i absolutely loved it..HeartHeart

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 6:57am | IP Logged
loved the update..
conversation between them was so beautifully written..
i can feel khushi's pain..
awesome update..
continue soon..

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 6:57am | IP Logged
One step closer to making amends. I liked this update! *thumbs up*

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 6:59am | IP Logged
...u are absolutely brilliant...

itz a fabulous update...

actually u fooled me...i thought itz arnav who z apologizing to khushi...

bt i liked rk's confession...
he senses smthng is connnected to arnav & khushi...right...???

best part of ur stories are the atmosphere u r creating...

each scene is lyk a beautiful painting...
church scene was beautifully written...

glad to knw that arnav trying to be close wit khushi...

eagerly waiting for next update..

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 7:00am | IP Logged
nice update...

i lyk d fact RK cleared d air..thou for a min i thought it was arnav...i feel he may be d catalyst dat brings dem closer...:)

nd den d mass tym...arnav obviously craves her presence...nd dats why he finds an unknown peace in her company ..i lyk d church nd d mass bckround...d prayer was sweet...

felt very low for khushi while readin bout her wait..bout her trust in god dat will make arnav return to her...nd now wen he is here den he is regfusin to recognise her...:'( nd d secnd reason seems apparent to khushi now bcoz RK too confirmed it to her...:'(..

i know arnav has lived in guilt for 15yrs...but atleast he has enjpyed his life in meanwhole whereas khushi...slowly nd slwly...d title of d stry is bcomin more fitin...:)

d last part bout u explainin d guilt was nice...leart a lot bout human emotions from it...:)

one question wat shud i call u???

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