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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 101)

-InCenDia- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 1:33am | IP Logged

Nice update... In the beginning it seems like the person was Arnav, but turned out to be RK... Even though he apologised, I am still having problem in accepting him as a good guy, may be the first impression and all...

And the rest, about Arnav and Khushi I don't know what to say... Each and every scene was filled with love, concern, peace, understanding and what not... In one word it was Ethereal...

Edited by blue_jay - 24 April 2013 at 1:58am

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AquaSandhya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Yay!!!!! Res

As far as apologies go, I must admit, Ranvijay's apology is one of the best I have ever come across. It was heartfelt and genuine. Clearly, it wasn't an evil-intentional hold he had on Khushi, since she felt that he wouldn't hurt her. Therefore, we have a rich (Audemars Piguet ... and no less), handsome, funny and intelligent guy (he understands the friendship between Arnav and Khushi better than anyone else in the house) in Ranvijay. Congratulations for salvaging Ranvijay's character brilliantlyClap. But, but, but ML ... I'm going to say a couple of things here which you may or maynot agree with. Whatever, Ranvijay's intentions were, he flirted with Khushi and went far enough to hold her hand. While I may enjoy the company of such guys at a fun-filled social parties, I would not want him as my man. Coz the probability of the guy crossing the line with another woman despite being married would be pretty high. Well, that is just my opinion. However, I would be very very very comfortable with this charater henceforth. 

Arnav tried to cope with the tragedy in his life by staying away from Khushi, Mussorie and family that would be constant reminders. and our dear Khushi coped by turning to God. Smart girl.  I could visualize the way Khushi moved over to make the little space and how Arnav had to sit next to her with their sides melded to each other. Thus begins the physical proximity ... huhuh Embarrassed

ML, It was not just Arnav's eyes that moistened listening to Khushi's prayers and her hopes and dreams. Mine did too. You do an amazing job of taking us on an emotional roller coaster ride. I love the way you portrayed an Arnav whose head was bent down symbolizing his shame for letting his friend down. 

Arnav joked. OMG Big smile. Thus begins the healing process for both Arnav and KhushiTongue

Am sitting in the airport typing this ... so, I have no doubt that you've figured out my obsession with your story. Need to reread the story and will comment if necessary in a few hours. Great one ML. 

Edited by AquaSandhya - 24 April 2013 at 2:03am

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clarissajohn IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 1:34am | IP Logged
res yay

Superb update and happy one



That was huge surprise  for me from ranvijay's part hoila he is so good


This update is for amends, ranvijay,  khushi and arnav, khushi


Feeling happy that finally they talked properly and arnav said what was in his heart and khushi too


So im eager how this will go further and whether this friendship will turn into love finally
Dil kehta hai chal unse mil
Uthte hain kadam, ruk jaate hain
Dil humko kabhi samjhaata hai
Hum dil ko kabhi samjhaate haiWink

Edited by clarissajohn - 24 April 2013 at 1:52am

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Anne_ArHi Senior Member

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 1:35am | IP Logged

This is the only word that I can think of at the moment, the update, the writing, everything.

Loved it!

Edited by zoya_quboolhai - 24 April 2013 at 1:53am

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Barun_Gf IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 1:55am | IP Logged
i m twelth i guess.. Shocked

Edited by Poojaagarwal394 - 24 April 2013 at 1:58am

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Kamala05 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 1:57am | IP Logged
I Love this story because its base is friendship . I can understand the pain of Khushi when her best friend Arnav seems to be unaware about the friendship they shared 15 years ago. I knew that Ranvijay will not be a bad guy throughout the FF. Glad that he apologized . I hate the part in which Anjali is explaining the friendship which they shared with Khushi.  What she mean by that she was their friend ? How can her status affect the beautiful relationship they shared. I like Ranvijay because he offered the friendship even after knowing her status.
What happened 15 years before to Khushi which made Arnav guilty ? I know u usual reveal the suspense in the end only .


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Kishmish IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 2:00am | IP Logged
Finally the wait is over ... Big smile

You had us all fooled into thinking that it was Arnav waiting to apologise to Khushi ... LOL
most of the time outsiders can see the situation more clearly than family people as 
they are not biased about the situation ... that's why the situation between Arnav and Khushi 
was clearer for RK to see ... 
it was good of him to apologise to Khushi and clear the air with her ... 

The church scene was so beautiful ... the way she moves and makes place for him to sit ... Tongue
and the way he finds her on the way back home ... 
finally breaking the ice and talking ... she telling him how she found solace in the church 
after he had left ... praying all the while that he comes back to her soon ... beautiful ... ML ... Day Dreaming

Thanks for a truly wonderful chapter ... 

Edited by Kishmish - 24 April 2013 at 4:41am

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tashi26 Goldie

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 2:09am | IP Logged
Ranvijay seems he is a nice guy...I really arnav and khushi's conversation...the part where khushi tells arnav that she can sleep in peace if arnav remembers her and doesn't want to talk to her because of her social status was very touching...great update...

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