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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 (Page 100)

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
Awesome update wonder if RK is going to cause them alot of trouble.

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Something happened to Khushi when she was five years old. Was the person responible someone Khushi and Arnav knew? 
Anjali's fiance is not a bad guy. It's just that because of Shyam we always feel her husband has to be the bad guy. 
When will Arnav have the courage to go and apologse to Khushi? 
Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
  I am really scared  to know what happened to Khushi in the past. You  have shown her  really innocent. Please please a humble request keep it that way.  can't take  any child abuse or molestation after seeing daily  these things going on in real  life . They are upsetting enough. We all    run  to ARSHI and their love stories  to get away from these things at least for some time.  

Please Please keep it milder in your story like attempt  to abuse or molestation.  Just want to believe that miracles do happen and that there is hope.   We are really losing  that  hope in the real world with all the stories going on. I dont even know why i am going on and on.  The  past of Khushi may nit even be what i am assuming.
Sorry to even suggest. You are a brilliant writer and i know you will do justice to the story. Mirage was the first story I read in IF and it is still my most favorite.



Edited by vks11 - 21 April 2013 at 9:49pm

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
So an emotionally distraught Arnav cause he couldn't help his 10 yr old innocent best friend.
Would love to read khushi's perspective on how she dealt with this trauma. Nothing is indicative in khuhi's narrative that she suffered from some abuse 15 yrs back.
Would see how this episode unfolds further.
Sitting in a church indeed has a very therapeutic property. 
Loved arnav and his parents interaction, glad that Naina told him how khushi looked after all his stuff and preserved the same for him all these years.
RK i am still a bit confused about him... Don't know whether to hate him or like him.
Will decide as this story progresses. 

Liza

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
I just wanted to say fantastic update

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 7:00pm | IP Logged
I am not feeling too good with the hints you are throwing in - somehow I suspect molestation or child rape of Khushi which Arnav knew of and he didn't defend her. I will wait till the story unravels more. I agree with you - there are monsters in the society and most of times the attackers are from family. Looking at the news, I lose faith in humanity day by day.

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
Simply Fabulous !

Your an amazing writer ... with each update the story moves forward and touches a raw nerve !

This update had so much going on technically ..like first Arnav Khushi interaction after the fiasco , then Arnav and Priest Conversation, followed by Arnav and Arthur then, Arnav and Naina and finally RK and Anjali!! 

And it all flowed flawlessly giving in the right amount of impact !

The clues thrown towards Khushi's past open up major evils like child molestation, abuse and rape!
Its happening around us unfortunately ...god knows where humanity is taking a nose dive !!


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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
I love a Complicated, Convulated Love Story, and looks like this one fits the description to the "T".
 
Loving the story more & more with every passing update. The power of words indeed... esepcially liked the words exchanged between Khushi & Arnav and between Arnav & the priest.
 
No offense, but I still dont like RK's character  Confused

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