Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 - Page 97

Posted: 10 years ago
I just caught up with all the parts, and my oh my, what a beautiful story you are weaving.

Its wonderful to the see Arnav and Khushi trying to pick things up from where they left off 15 years ago, but there are so many road blocks ahead.

I feel Khushi knows that he had seen her getting molested or sexually abused all those years ago, as opposed to Arnav's thinking that she is unaware about it all.

I also feel she is not blocking it all out, or has forgotten it all as Arnav thinks she has. She remembers all right. That much is apparent.

Anyway, I will stop with the assumptions, its your story, and I will let you tell it, 'cause you do a pretty darn awesome job of telling it anyway! :)
Posted: 10 years ago
I like surprises. Thanks for the early update.πŸ˜ƒ

And yes, i like the pagal kutha and the mussoorie bhains part. πŸ˜†
I like how you weave in the childhood memories along with the present. 
It used to have huge contrast between past and present.
But you changed it slightly when he shouted back the same line he used in the past.

And i liked the symbolism you used when the darkness envelopes him and he is all alone. She then comes back and tends to his wounds and the sunlight is back (:



Posted: 10 years ago
woah woah! Two updates.. hmm.. yay..
Gonna read.. btw new thread coming for next updte.. hai na? ;)
Posted: 10 years ago
excited to know their past... so finally Arnav came out of his shell. I guess that the other pair of eyes were RANVIJAY's...
awesome and lovely update... thanks for this lovely update...
waiting 4 the next.
Edited by yashu_95 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
distance btwn arshi reducing...food sign

wht hapnd 15 yrs before...?

big mystery
Posted: 10 years ago
oh u r bk with a new ff... cool... i'll catch up with the story soon... 
just wanted to let u knw once again... Mirage is one awesome story... im never going to forget it... i started reading it on FB n could not wait long enough for the updates and thats how i landed in IF... thanks for the wonderful story... oh n i hope u were the one putting it up on FB :)
Posted: 10 years ago
Just found your story, didn't realize you were writing again!

I have 8 chapters of catching up to do, so will comment in detail soon.
Posted: 10 years ago
This is the first time I am reading your work. It is simple beautiful and expressive.
Mistery still remains about the fateful day. Waiting!
Posted: 10 years ago

Little Khushi comparing her & Arnav to the buffalos is funny.

"Mussoorie Bhains! Run faster! Otherwise that Pagal
Kuttha will bite your bum" - this part in the flashback
made me laugh out loud while reading.Edited by Skiran - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
137 πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜ˆ
Next chapter in a new tread ??? πŸ˜ˆ

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