"Mussoorie Bhains! Run faster! Otherwise that Pagal Kuttha will bite your bum." 🤣
I read that and I had to stop reading to laugh. Couldn't control my laughter for a full minute. And the , when I went back to read the description of Arnav laughing, I had another round of laughter. The third round of laughter came with the flashback!
I like how they are slowly opening up to each other and noticing little details about each other!
You created such a wonderful picture with these lines. Beautifully penned down -
It was certainly mere seconds, but it felt as if the entire world had stopped for the two of them. Everything else was forgotten. Only two pair of eyes, one hazel while the other molten brown gazed into each other's depths, as if their souls were talking.
Neither could blink, neither could look away.
It was comforting and anguishing at the same time. It hurt and soothed simultaneously if that was even possible.
Lovely update! 😊
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