Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 - Page 84

atlast some arshilious chapter ..

Originally posted by: Agathe

Wonderful Update 😛😛

First part 

Reading the first line, I immediately realize it was RK 😆😆

How ?? Audemars Piguet 😉😉

and then also the way you wrote ... without revealing who it was, creating a tensed climate !!

and all that in 8 lines 👏👏👏

So finally RK isn't that bad 😉😉

You already said it, and I guessed it too, but it feels good 😆😆

Seems like he's going to play a role in Arnav and Khushi love story ... but a passive role 😳😳

I liiike it, ahaan 😳😳 

Second part 

Arnav late at Church ?? and no place to seat ?? not really listening to the sermon ??

It reminds me of someone 😆😆

OOOH Khushi was there !! I honestly didn't expect that 😲😲

From there it became very interesting !!! 

She isn't christian, but she has decided to find God's loves by any way ?? 

Does she feel guilty because of what happened in the past  ?? 

She's asking for forgiveness ?? 

That's what I thought first, but then the reasons she gave to Arnav were ... silly just like she said !

I feel like she lives only for Arnav 😕😕

But I think she didn't tell him the whole matter ! My humble opinion !

I think Arnav is a bit egocentric !! He saw Khushi had pain in her eyes and he immediately thought that it was because of him !! 😕

It may be sth else : Khushi is poor, has no family except her old Buaji ...why did he immediately think that it was because him ?? 😕😕

Yeah I know each time Arnav talks with her, or hear sth related to her it's more about him and her than her alone, but ... I think it's a immature from him!

I like the way Khushi asked directly if he was ashamed to be her friend, and didn't like the way Arnav changed the subject 😡😡 

But the FB was cute !!

And I noticed that till now all the FB were on Arnav's point of view !! Right ?? 

Why ?? any reasons ?? Is it to show that Arnav reminds what happened while Khushi lives with it ?? 

Then he didn't say sorry !!! 😕😕

What you wrote after was really interesting ... I don't have anything to point out because each word seems important ! 😉

The last part was cute !! and made smile just like Khushi !!

Yeah Arnav you're stupid, no doubt about that 😆😆

This Chapter was very interesting but confusing 😆😆

wonderful chapter...loved it

Really good FF. can't wait for the next update.

the best part of this ff are the flashbacks...annyav and kuku were so dman adorable!!!!🤗

Finally Arnav acknowledged he remembers her...he really needs to accept the past if he wants to move forward. I get that there is a lot of guilt inside him, but he needs to get over it...and making amends one step at a time might help him!

How can you write so beautifully to invoke two entirely different emotions in me? I feel this sharp pain and I can manage to smile too. Your story is so soulful, filled with love, angst, friendship, togetherness, loneliness, peace all at the same time. It's beyond words, it's Wow :)

Awesome update pleased Arnav has acknowledged that he remembers her

Originally posted by: molten_lava

No, you are reading too much between the lines. Why would Khushi feel guilty? She hasn't done anything wrong. Her conscience is clear. It's just that when she had no one else in her life, she turned to God to bring back that one friend who meant everything to her. She was so naive that inspite of not being a christian, she thought if she would pray to 'his' God, she would get him back.

And yes, somewhere, she does live only for Arnav. She has difficulty in letting go of people or rather Arnav from her life.

Yes, Arnav is kind of ego centric and thinks only about him. Why else do you think he thought his guilt is more than her pain? Arnav is also a flawed human being and this is his weakness in his character.

Yes. Correctly pointed out. She is still living those memories, while he only remembers it. That's why it's entirely from Arnav's POV. I'm not going to reveal what exactly is going on in her head so soon. I want to preserve it for the climax.😉 So until then, you have to adjust with only Arnav's POV of the story.

Originally posted by: Agathe

What I wanted to mean is maybe after that event, she felt she was punished by God. You know some people thinks like that : whatever bad happen to them is a punishment, whatever good happen to them is a gift given by God.

That's why I thought that she was may be asking for forgiveness. But I think too much 😉

It's sad to see that Khushi lives only for Arnav when it's not mutual 

She should be more self centered !!

And it's interesting because Arnav looks more mature and Khushi more childish but in fact Arnav is weak and Khushi 'a lot stronger' !! 😉😉

You preserve so many things for the climax !! 😆😆

I'm sure we'll all wait like crazy people raping the refresh button till you update just like the last time !!

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