Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 - Page 67

i am sorry i took this long to come check out your story.
and as usual, i am blown away by the depth of each character, even the supporting cast.
buaji and her say in khushi's education.. wow.

and yes, only a stranger can see the crackling air  between the two leads, and vivian is a bang-on fit for your RK.

NNM.. nah, i will go with BS😳
Edited by pink.lotus - 11 years ago

Nice Update!

Anjali's fiancee is creepy and weird.
worried for Khushi:(
Eager to see whats next .

awesome update..

Loved the update. The arhi part, the talk with the priest, loved it. Wonder whats RK upto

Dread thinking of what happened to Khushi, something so traumatising that she seems to have completely blocked it out, and on top of that the one person who was always with her appears to have completely forgotten about her. Step up Arnav, it's going to be damn hard but am sure he has it in him to stick with her from now on. Great update 👏 thank you so much. Looking forward to Wednesday

finally read d full updat ...:-) Dat ranvijay is so cheap :-( :-( Yet cherished d fact dat he knws dere smthng btwn annyaw and khushi ...:-) :-)

good that Arnav will atleast be kind towards Khushi and not hurt her... hope Vij brings AK together..

loved the part...

Awesome update...👏

That was a nice update... Arnav doesnt know what to say and regrets his actions later...To be honest,I really don't wanna know what happened with khushi 15 years ago. You have portrayed her character with such an innocence  it is impossible to think what she might have gone through.. keep updating