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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 - Page 58

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice! Poor Khushi...I think Anjali's fiance is a creep.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Once again an amazing update. 

I love your characterizations of Arnav and Khushi and the childhood flashbacks have such warmth and innocence, that anyone can relate to them. 

RK is the typical spoilt brat and Arnav's first impression of him was spot on. RK hitting on Khushi sparked some strong reactions in both. Arnav's protective instincts kicked in and Khushi was just way too scared. That makes me wonder what really happened. 

Maggie Smith as Dadi...that's cool. I love her. 

I am glad you didn't mention who you imagined as Arnav. I can't imagine anyone else besides Sobti as Arnav...even if he's three-eighth British. πŸ˜³

Looking forward to the next update. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Shona.Angel

OMG OMG OMG!!!

YAYYY!!



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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Agathe


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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved d fb more dan anythng elz
dat was d cutest part 

ASR s quite observant 

RK😑
he had d audacity 2 tlk abt khushi in frnt of arnav

hw does anji end vth dse kind of guys Shyam/Rk

i guz itz high tym arhi tlk vth each othr
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Posted: 11 years ago
For the introduction that you gave for a RK i was half way falling in love with him...but yeh toh snakewa ki tarah niklah.🀒😑

Balki snake se bhi bada kamina niklah.  At least shyam used to never flirt with khushi in front of Arnav...

Poor anjali there seems to be no respite for her...πŸ˜”

Loved the update.

Liza
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update RK changed real quickly. Arnav really did let his anger get the best if him wonder what Khushi is going to make of it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Things getting interesting. Whattay creep that man is.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh ho..!! RK is turning out to be bad guy. Poor Anjali..πŸ˜” . The helplessness in her eyes brought back the bad memories for him. And he had reacted finally for Khushi. Nice chapter as usual.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab update , excellent narration , loved it to the core , rk is really cheep , may god bless Anjali's soul , how can she select such a cheep man ,Arnav's reaction towards rk , when he touched Khushi , was epic , superb , marvalous , i cant explain how happy i felt when i read those lines , so finally ice is melting and Arnav is expressing his emotions   .Eagerly waiting for next partEdited by samirao - 11 years ago