Hi I am first time commenting on your story.
That's because your first story mirage I read just few month back and I am really blown out after that.
When I come to know that you have come back with new story I can't stop my self and read all parts till now in one go.
I have been to that part of india and I could feel the beauty of that place in your story.
I could visualise all the scene in front of me happening at that time.
I am imagining the character of arnav and Khushi of IPK and keeping in mind them only I can say that you have portrait those characteristic very well.
I like your grip on the story, not jumping on the next part but keeping it in its pace.
I could feel the fresh air and cold of the mountains in this as I know how beautiful is that part of india.
I am Lucky that I came across your writing and read it.
Thanks for the beautiful stories.
