Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 - Page 38

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Posted: 11 years ago
ahaaann nt so late bt ya again i m late...:-( :-( :-(
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Posted: 11 years ago
going to strt reading nw ...:-) :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: molten_lava


I don't mind the predictions. Keep them coming. I see another Agathe and Mysterious_maze in the making here.πŸ˜† I meant the comment for others who are unfortunately completely clueless about the past and from their comments it just seems as if they want me to reveal it in the next chapter thereby defeating the entire purpose of my story.πŸ˜† And that curiosity spoils the entire beauty of the FF.


Super πŸ˜ƒ. Look forward to exciting chapters where the highs and lows of life bring Arnav and Khushi together forever πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...this is awesum...loved it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
"Then, your Dada would have come after
you with his rifle to shoot down his
competitor. He was quite possessive about
me, you know." She said, winking at him... Dis particular lines was so damn cute .. Wat a grt bonding..
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Posted: 11 years ago
You kept to your word and delivered on time!

What a heartbreak for Khushi! Surely, Arnav must feel the same somewhere. Could he have really forgotten all that he had once treasured?


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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally read d update ...:-) :-) it was fun loving seeing d bonding of annyavv and dadi .. at d same tym it made me cry dat khushi lost her beat frnd yrs ago ... c couldnt shout her name lyk c used to cal ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi ML,
I couldn't hold back my tears after reading this update...
I feel sooo nostalgic...as I have written before, childhood memories makes me...I miss it...
U have written about their childhood so beautifully...It hurts to see Khushi's hurt...beautifully depicted...πŸ‘, the loss, the pain, the hurt, the helplessness...everything...
U are just too good...and yes as u have written in your note, I too like the subtle flow and growth in relations, its more real...
Take care dear...and...
Keep going...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hola πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

It was easier to stalk you late night than morning πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

The chapter was really nice, I enjoyed reading it ! 
I love Dadima ! She is so ... perfect πŸ˜† you potrayed her as a perfect wife and perfect Dadi !!

The trio Ma, Nani and Mami πŸ€£πŸ€£ like Charlie's Angels !

Arnav and Khushi's parts were so cute and so heart breaking at the same time ! I feel so sad for Khushi !

In the third chapter you showed that Anjali was also in their bonding, but now she's missing !! Why ?? 


Short comment πŸ˜’, long comment probably on wednesday, as I'm bit busy with tests 


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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update..i luv the kids ..so pure nd untainted...u hve described them perfectly..
Arnavs grandmom seems a wise women..

Eager for next..