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Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
HEy,
I loved it! I loved it! I've never read your earlier work barring a few cute OS' on the Raizada couple and baby. So I was curious to read a completely different, intense tale from you and voila! it's totally gripped me in two chapter :) Even I could cringe away from clingy Lavanya, be intimidated of Arnav's military father, bask in his mother's love and was elated when chirpy Khushi met him. I couldn't find the Casanova attitude in A when his father said so and was wondering whether change in him was not because of his alienation from family but the past and you soon confirmed it. Oh I felt so deflated at the end as K's smile slipped :( Beautiful work, already bookmarked and waiting for updates :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Why i feel something happened very very bad in their past.

i always know its khushi who called him annyva

but now chotey shahab

 

what happene in their 

is arnav love khushi from childhood?

 

i feel khushi some problem means i don't know what she doesn't remember anything regarding their past and she also show no different affection toward him 

she show enthauism after seeing him 15 years

just like a normal friend nothing else

i feel is she reallly remember their because their past painful that's y arnav become so different as per their parents pov

now but khushi she too much normal 

may be i have to wait for more chapters how u disclose the further story 

arnav showed too cold behavior toward his father also he still in past

what's his parents role

is that becoz they sent him foreign country only or anything else

 

 

Edited by -LiveCrazily- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great Chapter !!!
Lavanya seems to be the clingy type ...
His Parents concerns about him seem guinuine..

Aww ..the memories of their childhood looks so cute..!!
How sad must Khushi feel for his non rememberance and her pain was truly visible by her words ...

Wonder what pain was Arnav talking about ...
What happened ' that day ' ??

Looking Forward to see how the Story Unravels...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update πŸ‘...the story is very intriguing...wiating for the next update πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was an amazing update !! 

The story already looks very intriguing ! So they are childhood friends and something happened...but maybe Khushi doesn't remember it? Why did Arnav pretend not recognize her? 


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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm definitely hooked ...very interesting ! 


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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...tx for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read Mirage and I am very happy to see you back with another story.  Love the setting of this one and look forward to read as you unfurl your story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome chapters and I'm already hooked to the story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
First and foremost ... loooved your golden rules :):):) 

Enjoyed the first two chapters of The Trampled Butterfly. So far Arnav and Khushi appear to be very much in character - brooding Arnav and friendly Khushi despite Arnav not acknowledging her. Where there are Arnav and Khushi there is heart break and passionate love. Look forward to future updates :)