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Ariya FF : Tum ho mera pyaar*Thread 2 link pg114* (Page 67)

sharmaayushi Senior Member

Joined: 04 July 2013
Posts: 914

Posted: 06 August 2013 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
fantastic update di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved the way riya handled the situation whaen arjun was angry
the 2 slap before kiss was amazing
ab arjun ko pehla slap khake yaad aa jata to 2nd wala slap nai khana padta
roshni left red with angry...great to see that
ankle twist part was awesome
the part of riya's small cute devil one was amazing
riya on arjun's lap...great
hv to say that he is her boyfrnd...koi option tha hi nai usske pass
the last line"Arjun angerly hold her wrist excused me girl if u both hav no problem can I talk with my girl friened..."
was great
waiting to see their conversation
thnx 4 such a lovely and great part
it was too gud not at all boring
continue soon
will be waiting to see arjun-riya conversation

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ms.ObseSSeD Senior Member

Joined: 05 March 2013
Posts: 303

Posted: 06 August 2013 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
To good!!! I loved the flashback !LOLLOL

  And haye kitna romantic wala kiss !!!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

I LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!Big smileHeart

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ll_megha_ll IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 March 2013
Posts: 19883

Posted: 07 August 2013 at 12:32am | IP Logged
it was awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super-duper, block buster and mindblowing update my dear piyu.
firstly thanx for update.
vo bhi itna bimar hone ke bavajoodand also busy.
now come to update.
it was awesome and wonderfull.
loved ariya kiss.
it was hot.
i am blushing very much.
loved ariya pov and specially riya.
riya all do thi because she want to give lesson to roshni.
i just want to kill roshni.
riya feels shy and goes away to arjun but her ankle is very hurt.
love the way arjun smiled riya.
so now riya old arjun back.
arjun again captured her lips.
loved ariya flashback scene.
arjun riya ko ooty ghumata hai because she blackmailed him ki agar unsne nahi dikhaya to vo apne dad ko sach bata degi.
omg ariya fight in toy train.
love there cute fight.
riya tells to her friend that arjun is her boyfriend.
loved it.
and arjun angry with her.
loved arjun last line.
continue soon.

Edited by mastmegha22 - 07 August 2013 at 12:44am

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Christeee IF-Dazzler

Joined: 23 November 2012
Posts: 2760

Posted: 07 August 2013 at 3:21am | IP Logged
bichara arjun kaha phas gaya aur riya sitting in his lap 
wow thanx for pm

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devildiva21 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 26 December 2012
Posts: 14122

Posted: 07 August 2013 at 3:54am | IP Logged
super duper update ...!!!!
ariya kiss was very romantic...!!1
and their pov's while kissing awesome...!!Wink
hoep ab ye rosh aur koi pange na kare...!!1
fb was again amazing..!!!1 hahaah ab rii ko ooty ghumaoWink
love the way she was giving him orders...!!LOL
window wali seat ke liye she sat on his lap.. and told her friends that he is her boy friend...1!
ab kya hoga?Wink
continue soon...!!

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zubiya92 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 04 August 2013
Posts: 7710

Posted: 07 August 2013 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Great update loveit plz cont soon

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nakshatra92 Goldie

Joined: 05 December 2012
Posts: 1675

Posted: 07 August 2013 at 5:36am | IP Logged
nice update...

ARIYA kiss and roshni went away wid anger Big smile lykd it...

fb was awesome, riya sitting on arjun's lap, arjun riya ki bf... LOL

update soon

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Aks13 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 28 December 2012
Posts: 9971

Posted: 07 August 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged

Comment on part-14

Awesome blossom update dr.

OMG Arjun cme in DIG's party with Riya.

Loved Ariya convo n the way thy complemented eachother for their looks.

FB was amazing.

Awww how easily she made Arjun smile.

Oh Riya cme to party coz of Arjun's condition. Loved their bonding n understanding.

Loved the way Shree n Riya greeted eachother.

Wht case was Roshini talking about????? Wht happened in that case??????

The way Arjun warned Rohan was fantastic.

Loved Ariya dancing portion.

Wow Roshini was jealous of Riya.

Hate Roshini for the way she behaved with Riya n coz of her Riya sprained her ankle.

Awww Arjun took her in his arms.

OMG she slapped Arjun.

Wow she told him to kiss her.

Loved it so so much.

Sorry for late comments dr.

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