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Ariya FF : Tum ho mera pyaar*Thread 2 link pg114* (Page 25)

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 7:21am | IP Logged

Khud ke repotation ke koe phiker nahi but atleast hamari repotation ke to phiker ke hoti..
Sameer give one dead look to pihu..
n she stoped to looked her brother anger face..
riya was surprisly looked all..
she feel very sad when she hears all this..
how can any sister say all this n vo bhi arjun ke liye..
how..?
kuch to hai,jo mujhe nahi pata,
Sa-dont wary papa main abhi leker ata hoon arjun ko..
riya couldnt stoped herself for asking..
Arjun kahan gaya hai..or aap sab ehsae kyun baat ker rahe hain..
.
pihu-phir se kahin baid ker sharab pe rahe honge..
.
(loll plz bear with me thoda ajeeb hai..but dont warry riya hain naa)
Ri-kya (she coudnt belive)
.
Sa-papa main jaaker dekhker ata hoon..
Ri-main bhi aap ke sath chalongi..riya said
.
Raj-per riya baita..
Ri-uncle plz
sa-thik hai..
---
On the other arjun was lost in thought..

--



--
What happened few minute before-
SCENCE-AT BEACH
Ar-chalen gher nahi jaana..
Ri-haan per mujhe kuch lena hai,to moll chalen..
Auto main or vo bhi mol arjun reply,
Riya very inocently kyun auto vale mol nahi jaate..

Ar-Chalooo..
Ri-kahannn
Ar-mere pass koe dosara option hai,
riya with smile..
both goes in mol..
--
IN mol-Riya was bussy in shoping ..
but accidently arjun graze fell on one girl she also bussy in shoping..
ye ..ye yahan kya ker ..
His mind goes in flash..
the painful past memory..
Arjun dragged riya outside mol ,
Ri-arjun baat kya hai,n why u looked so upset..
But arjun didnt say anythink,
he droped riya outside his house n left..
---
arjun walking on a road.
Som flashes of past memory comes.







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---
hey u know tum haste huye kitane achhe lagte ho,
Ar-or kya kya achha lagta hai,




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 07 May 2013 at 9:43am

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 7:22am | IP Logged


Girl-sab kuch..tumhari her ek cheej mujhe pasand hai..
chahen vo tumhara hasna ho chahen,gussa kerna..
Ar-tum ek dam pagal ho kya jarorat the ye sab kerne ke..
.
Girl-vo to main hoon,
or jo cheej mujhe chahiye,matlab her kimaat per chahiye,
ager vo meri nahi to kise ke nahi,
--
Arjun goes inside one bar--
He sit his usal place..
n order one drink--
he drink all in one he tightly closed his eyes as wanna to hide himself that hurting memory..
.
noo he was not running his hurting memory..but he wanna to forget all that bitter memory..
"


one poem hop u lik-
"patjhad bhi aker
akser gujer jate hai,
jab jindagi he patjhad ban jaaye,
to kaise gujare ge,
bus ab tera he sahara hai,
(he took drink glass up)
mujhe yeh dost,
bus mein tere liye or tu mere liye.."







one more--
.
he order another drink but before he drink more..
somone hold his hand..
.
Yee kiske himmat huye jo arjun suryakant rawte ka haanth pakad sake..
He looked up..
tu..m tum yahan kya ker rahi hoo,

Ar-oye sam tu ese yahan kyun leker aya..
.
Sa-bas bahoot ho gaya arjun chalo yahan se,
.
Ar-are abhi to pina shuro kiya hai,
abhi to maine use or usane mujhe chuya hai(he means drink)
.
Riya cant see arjun in that condition..
Ri-arju plz chalo yahan se..
Ar-no oo i m not going any where..
Ri-to tum nahi chal rahe ho,
Ar-bola na ek baar,or vaise tum yahan kya ker rahi ho,
tum jao yahan se,
Ri-nahi tumhen liye bina nahi jaongi,tum chalte ho ya phir,
.
(Sameer patiencely obserbing both)
sam got one importent call so he goes outside..
Ar-ya phir (light smile appears on his face)
Ri-ok ager tum yahan se nahi jaa rahe ho,
to main bhi apne liye ek drink order ker leti hoon,
.
waiter one drink for me..
Riya took drink in her hand..
tum chal rahe ho ya nahi verna ,main sach main pee longi,
.
Ar-haan




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 07 May 2013 at 10:16am

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 7:22am | IP Logged


Pee lo maine kab mana kiya..
Ri-main sach keh rahi hoon,
Ar-haan to roka kisne hai,
Riya angrly took tha glass n
for one second ,its look like she realy drink that,
but arjun hold her hand in mid,
rised his one eyebrow n looked her with a litle smiled on his face..
Ar-ye rum hain koe coold drink nahi jo udaya or pee gaaye,
Ri-(Looked him with angry look )
mujhe bhi pata hai,main milk peeti bachhi nahi hoon,
ab chal rahe ho ya nahi,
.


Ar-to tum mujhe yahan se liye bina nahi jaane bali,
thik hai chalo,
But she lost in arjun eyes..
Ar-chalenn yaa tumhen bhi pina hai,
.
arjun getup but he lost his balence..
but imedeatly riya hold him,
she put his hand behind her back n give him some suport..
.
At the time arjun lost her eyes..

sameer also came inside n saw both lost each other..
Sameer smiled happly..
He helped n carefuly put arjun backside of car,riya also sit next to him n sameer dive his car
--
SCENCE SHIFT-
Now arjun sleeping in his room ,
n on the other
riya asked sameer that why arjun behaving like this..
she was totaly confused why arjun behaving like this n why he is so upset..
why he start drinking n waisting his life like this..
--
He didnt told more ..
bus etana he kaha..its happened after Ooty case..
use case ke baad uske sari life he changed ho gaye,
vo arjun rawte jiske naam se sare log darte the..
jiske sab..
(He stoped in mid) ijaat kerte the vo kahi kho gaya hai...
(In mind-per ek umeed dikhi hai tumhare ane se)
.
Na uski fiancee use jhood ker jaati or..
.
pure five years ho gaye..
na usne kise ko apne pass ane diya or na he apne gum ko door jaane diya,
.
En five years main arjun ko kise ne khush hote or smile kerte nahi dekha oer jab se tum aye ho..
vo phir se pehale ke tarah muskurane laga hai,
on the other she was lost in her own world..




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 07 May 2013 at 10:53am

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 7:24am | IP Logged

why arjun why u dont share all this to me..
i kno may be its all happened bez of me..
yes i m responsible for this..
--
She snapped her thought when sameer say..
raat kaphi ho gaye hai,
tum jaker so jaao..
--
ON THE OTHER-
scence shift-
.
One girl-waoo kitana achha lag raha hai..phir se vapise aa ker..
Ham bhi tanhan hain tum bhi tanha ho..
Ha ha.. ha ha.. ha ..ha...
bus kuch time ke baat hai..
phir tum mere bas mare..
Mujhe jo chahiye vo sirf or sirf mera ..
or ager vo meri nahi huye to vo kise ke nahi hogi ..kise ke nahi..
.
she took one picture in her hand..
Or tum jante ho achhe tarah main ye ker sakti hoon,
I meen it..
ha ha ha she loughed loudly...

---
next morning-
Scence-arjun room-
time ten o'clook,
Naina(arjun's mom) took one glass lemon water n goes his son's room..
but before she goes inside she saw riya already there..
She sit on a bed n waiting for arjun..
When he woke up..
Ar-Ahhaa sir phata jaa raha hai(he feel so much pain in his head)
Ri-jab etani hajam nahi hoti yo pete kyun ho,
mujhe pata tha kuch ehsa he hoga ye lo lemon water..
Arjun looked happly her..
Ri-with anger ab ye smile kerna band karo,or jaldy se ese pee lo serdard thik ho jayega..
(she wanna to say somthing but not said)
(Naina happly leaft there)
arjun take that glass n start drinking,
Ar-Ahuuu kitana khata hai..
But drink all when he saw her angly look..
pee liya baba etana ghoor kyun rahi hoo,
Ar-Ri tum kab se yahan ho..
but she didnt say anythink,
She wanna to get up but ajun hold her hand ..
Before se say arjun hug her tightly...
TBC-
precape-One truth-
Ariya past scence
----
Why riya says its happened bez of her..
who is arjun fiancee...?
n why she left him.???
if u wanna to know then dont forget to read this story..

mast ya bore.???

me waiting
piya---




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 07 May 2013 at 11:22am

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Very nice part dr..
feel bad for arjun..
n whats the prob of pihu..
but riya sam m raj is very nice..
lv the way riya hanlde him..
ohh mor scence was good update soon...

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Di wow,
ye pics ke saath aur bhi awssm lag raha hai ff..
And arjun drink Ouch
kya kaha tha, aadaton ki gulami karna meri aadat nahi hai Angry

aur ab fullon talli..
Well loved riya's concern for him and she also goes wid sam to bring him back Embarrassed

and riya ne rum order kiya Wink

di wo flashback accha tha..and the pic suits that..
Big smile
may be the girl is rosh Confused
arjun smiling at her wen he bring lime LOL
pitega riya se Wink

ab hug bhi kar liya..
Aaggrrr di, ab hi stop karna tha, mera game muje hi..nt fair Cry
cliff hanging..

Waise nice nt fantastic updt tha Clap

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Nice update... dats exactly my question too why did she say all this happened coz of her??? is Roshini his ex fiancee???? update soon...

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged

super dii Clap
luv it

riya's role is veryvwisely portrayed
arjun darta hai uske gusse se LOL LOL


kash vo lrki ROSHNI hi Confused

the pic were awesome Smile

abb hug bhi hogi ariya mein aur kya kya hoga lol


continue soon
eagerly waiting for more

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