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Ariya FF : Tum ho mera pyaar*Thread 2 link pg114* (Page 22)

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 7:22am | IP Logged


Pee lo maine kab mana kiya..
Ri-main sach keh rahi hoon,
Ar-haan to roka kisne hai,
Riya angrly took tha glass n
for one second ,its look like she realy drink that,
but arjun hold her hand in mid,
rised his one eyebrow n looked her with a litle smiled on his face..
Ar-ye rum hain koe coold drink nahi jo udaya or pee gaaye,
Ri-(Looked him with angry look )
mujhe bhi pata hai,main milk peeti bachhi nahi hoon,
ab chal rahe ho ya nahi,
.


Ar-to tum mujhe yahan se liye bina nahi jaane bali,
thik hai chalo,
But she lost in arjun eyes..
Ar-chalenn yaa tumhen bhi pina hai,
.
arjun getup but he lost his balence..
but imedeatly riya hold him,
she put his hand behind her back n give him some suport..
.
At the time arjun lost her eyes..

sameer also came inside n saw both lost each other..
Sameer smiled happly..
He helped n carefuly put arjun backside of car,riya also sit next to him n sameer dive his car
--
SCENCE SHIFT-
Now arjun sleeping in his room ,
n on the other
riya asked sameer that why arjun behaving like this..
she was totaly confused why arjun behaving like this n why he is so upset..
why he start drinking n waisting his life like this..
--
He didnt told more ..
bus etana he kaha..its happened after Ooty case..
use case ke baad uske sari life he changed ho gaye,
vo arjun rawte jiske naam se sare log darte the..
jiske sab..
(He stoped in mid) ijaat kerte the vo kahi kho gaya hai...
(In mind-per ek umeed dikhi hai tumhare ane se)
.
Na uski fiancee use jhood ker jaati or..
.
pure five years ho gaye..
na usne kise ko apne pass ane diya or na he apne gum ko door jaane diya,
.
En five years main arjun ko kise ne khush hote or smile kerte nahi dekha oer jab se tum aye ho..
vo phir se pehale ke tarah muskurane laga hai,
on the other she was lost in her own world..




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 07 May 2013 at 10:53am

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 7:24am | IP Logged

why arjun why u dont share all this to me..
i kno may be its all happened bez of me..
yes i m responsible for this..
--
She snapped her thought when sameer say..
raat kaphi ho gaye hai,
tum jaker so jaao..
--
ON THE OTHER-
scence shift-
.
One girl-waoo kitana achha lag raha hai..phir se vapise aa ker..
Ham bhi tanhan hain tum bhi tanha ho..
Ha ha.. ha ha.. ha ..ha...
bus kuch time ke baat hai..
phir tum mere bas mare..
Mujhe jo chahiye vo sirf or sirf mera ..
or ager vo meri nahi huye to vo kise ke nahi hogi ..kise ke nahi..
.
she took one picture in her hand..
Or tum jante ho achhe tarah main ye ker sakti hoon,
I meen it..
ha ha ha she loughed loudly...

---
next morning-
Scence-arjun room-
time ten o'clook,
Naina(arjun's mom) took one glass lemon water n goes his son's room..
but before she goes inside she saw riya already there..
She sit on a bed n waiting for arjun..
When he woke up..
Ar-Ahhaa sir phata jaa raha hai(he feel so much pain in his head)
Ri-jab etani hajam nahi hoti yo pete kyun ho,
mujhe pata tha kuch ehsa he hoga ye lo lemon water..
Arjun looked happly her..
Ri-with anger ab ye smile kerna band karo,or jaldy se ese pee lo serdard thik ho jayega..
(she wanna to say somthing but not said)
(Naina happly leaft there)
arjun take that glass n start drinking,
Ar-Ahuuu kitana khata hai..
But drink all when he saw her angly look..
pee liya baba etana ghoor kyun rahi hoo,
Ar-Ri tum kab se yahan ho..
but she didnt say anythink,
She wanna to get up but ajun hold her hand ..
Before se say arjun hug her tightly...
TBC-
precape-One truth-
Ariya past scence
----
Why riya says its happened bez of her..
who is arjun fiancee...?
n why she left him.???
if u wanna to know then dont forget to read this story..

mast ya bore.???

me waiting
piya---




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 07 May 2013 at 11:22am

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Very nice part dr..
feel bad for arjun..
n whats the prob of pihu..
but riya sam m raj is very nice..
lv the way riya hanlde him..
ohh mor scence was good update soon...

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Di wow,
ye pics ke saath aur bhi awssm lag raha hai ff..
And arjun drink Ouch
kya kaha tha, aadaton ki gulami karna meri aadat nahi hai Angry

aur ab fullon talli..
Well loved riya's concern for him and she also goes wid sam to bring him back Embarrassed

and riya ne rum order kiya Wink

di wo flashback accha tha..and the pic suits that..
Big smile
may be the girl is rosh Confused
arjun smiling at her wen he bring lime LOL
pitega riya se Wink

ab hug bhi kar liya..
Aaggrrr di, ab hi stop karna tha, mera game muje hi..nt fair Cry
cliff hanging..

Waise nice nt fantastic updt tha Clap

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Nice update... dats exactly my question too why did she say all this happened coz of her??? is Roshini his ex fiancee???? update soon...

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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged

super dii Clap
luv it

riya's role is veryvwisely portrayed
arjun darta hai uske gusse se LOL LOL


kash vo lrki ROSHNI hi Confused

the pic were awesome Smile

abb hug bhi hogi ariya mein aur kya kya hoga lol


continue soon
eagerly waiting for more
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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
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Plz update soon..
 
 
and Arju ki Fin. kon hai?
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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
nice update
arjun is drinkingShocked
loved the way riya is handling himTongue
she is the perfect one to arjunLOL drinkmasterROFL
that girl is scaryOuch is she roshini? his fiancee?
which case sam & his dad talking abt?
what happened in the past? y riya is blaming herself?
cont soon

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