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Ariya FF : Tum ho mera pyaar*Thread 2 link pg114* (Page 21)

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Back with next part hop u like...

PART=6
"Barish aa ker phir tham
jaati hai..to mujhe ek dosara moka kyun nahi---- --------(arjun suryakant rawte)"
-----
.



.
SCENCE-Ariya r in auto..
Ri-Arjun hum kahan jaa rahe hain,
.
Ar-jahan ye auto vala hamen le jayega,
.
Ri-plz bolo na arjun,
.
Ar-Aree baba kitana bolati ho tum ..
kuch time ke liye chup nahi baid sakti..
.
Ri-noo never or ye tum bhi achhe se jante ho,
riya mukhargee ne kabhi bhi chup betana nahi sikha,
per dosaron ko chup kerana achhe se ata hai,
riya give her big cute dimple smile,
.
Arjun looked her n for that second he lost in her smiles..
--
past-
Arjun yelled on riya..
h dare u slapped me twise in a day..
.
Ri-The same mr acp u touched me twise in a day..ups not twise..balki several time,
mujhe to ehsa lag raha hai,
ke tum mujhe touch kerne ke bahane dhoond rahe ho,
.
Ar-What..? kya bakwas ker rahi ho..arjun turned his face other side,
arjun pissed his teeth ye ladki ..ye ladki samajhati kya hai apne aap ko,
.
Sudenly door opened ...
kunal(ooty etf cheif) n commisioner (Benoy mukhargee) enters in the room..
riya's face opposite to both,
arjun moved toward commi n kunal..
Ar-good evning sir,n dont warry sir aapki baidi kaa jald pata chal jayega,
.
commi just nodded his head(as he wad very worried for her doughter)
i hop so,
but any way abhi hum case per dhayan dete hain,
.
"when commisioner spoke riya heared her dad voice,her joy hav no limite now,she tured her face toward the voice,yes it was her dad.."
.

.
Ku-kuch bataya es ladki ne,
.
Ar-mahi abhi tak to kuch nahi bataya but i hop jald he sab kuch bata degii..
.
riya runs toward her dad n arjun stood in mid..
riya pushed arjun away n hug her dad tightly..
.
when she pushed him away,
the first word arjun's mouth comes out...What



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What the hell..?
arjun..turned n shocked to saw riya hugging commisioner..
arjin n kunal both r confused n looked each other..ye chal kya raha hai..
.
when commi also hug her back..then kunal n arjun shocked more,
.
(He he abhi to shock treatment start huye hai loll poor arjun)
.
Dad where r u...apko aab meri yaad aye hai..
.
She hugging her dad n start complaining,
both arjun n kunal mouth opened in what the o look..
.
Shree comes inside n notice his both seniors..
Sirr sir shree shouted..
both comes out their trance..
sir she is commi doughter..
riya riya mukhergee,
Shree gives one photo to arjun,
arjun took that pic,it was riya's pic with commi.
shree muttered under his breath..
ab to arjun sir ko koe nahi bacha sakta..sare mujarimon ko chood ker ek commi ke baiti he mili the pakadane ke liye,
maine to pehale hi kaha tha arjun sir se,
etani khubsurat ladki mujarim ho hi nahi sakti..
--
Riya break that hug look toward arjun(holding her fathers hand,just wanna to show him now her father support also with her)
.
Commi-riya tum yahan..tum to race course ke liye gaye di,
.
Ri-(stil looking arjun)
yaa dad ,race ke baad mujhe etf office ana pada..ek case ke silsile mai,

Co-case ..? per kon saa..
.
She comes near to arjun with mischivious smile..
Ri-ab ye to apko mr acp arjun hi baata sakte hai,
Sje rised her eyebrow ..
.
kyun sahi kahan na main..mr Arjun..
arjun didnt know ,how he reply ..?
riya comes near to him n wishper slowly ..only arjun can heared..
kyun bolati baand ho gaye acp.
maine to pehale he worn kiya tha,mujhase panga maat lena..per tumne meri soni he nahi,
next time kisi ko arrest kerne se pehale,
uske baare main achhe se pata ker lena,
Arjun give her dead look,
Uff stil dam atitude,
manana padega vaise bade cool lagte ho dam look main bhi,
tumhen nahi lagta





Edited by Piyarani - 23 April 2013 at 11:50pm

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Tumhen nahi lagta acp mujhe pakane ke vajaye real mujhrim ko pakadte to tumhara naam ..
kal ke new paper main hota,
now arjun ager hav no limite..
arjun cleanched his fist..
But before his anger rised..its decresed very fast when he heared thanks..
yes thanks
Ri-Any way vo sab to hamare bich chalta rahega but heartly thanks for saving my life,
Arjun looked confused toward her..
but she give her cute dimple smiled n turned her face toward her father..
.

Ri-dad i want to go home..
Co-Hum abhi..but now i hv an importent work..
Ri-ok u finish ur work main akele chali jaongi..
Commi-no u dont..its to late..its almost 9 o clock,
.
Ri-dad i m not a small kids as u always think she pouted her mouth,
.

Com to arjun-arjun ager tum bura na mano to kya tum riya ko gher drop ker dogi..
Arjun just nodded his head n say to follow him..
Arjun muttered under his breath..bus ab driver banana reh gaya tha..
kuch kaha tumne she ask..
Ar-nahii ..ab jaldy chologi mujhe or bhi bahoot se kaam hai,
(akdu ek dam akdu..riya wishper)
---
Riyaa utaro...arjun yelled
Ri-kya huya arju..
Ar-kyun ab mumbai ghumane ka man nahi hai,
ya phir es auto main hi baidana hai,
.
aree vah arjun ye to beach hai..she excitedly comes out..
waoo arjun kitana khubrurat beach hai,
ye sea kitana khubrurat lag raha hai,
Ar-haan ager mumbai ghumani haii to ye jagah sabse best hai,yahan se sari mombai ke darshan hote hain,
.
Riya hold arjun's hand ,
Ri-chloo na arjun paani ke pass chalte hai..
.
Ar-nahii ager tumhen jana hai to tum jao,per main yahin thik hoon,
.
Ri-chalo na plz she ask again,
.
arjun in flash b-
arjun with one girl n both playing in water,
Ar-Are kya ker rahi ho tum..ye paani gerana band karo,
gi-are tum kitan unromentic. ho arjun kitana maja aa raha hai,
or tum enjoy kerne ke vajaye door bhag rahe ho




Edited by Piyarani - 24 April 2013 at 12:24am

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Arjun arjun...kahan kho gaye riya waves her hand..
Arjun snaped out his thought,
Kahin kahi(rude atitude)
or vaise bhi mumbai ghumane ka vada kiya tha na ke tumhare saath pani main khelane ka,
main yahin khada hoon,
tumhen khelana hai to jaker khel lo,or mera dimag khana band karo,
.
Riya-thik hai akadane ki jarorat nahi,tumhen nahi ana maat ayo main to jaa rahi hoon..
(khados pan nahi gaya abhi tak she wishper slowly)
Ar-arjun rised his eyebrow n ask kuch kaha tumne,
ri-nahi n moved toward sea..
n start playing with water..
unwere the fact that arjun eyes fix only riya,
.
arjun gav a slightly smile as he heared what she said,
(Ohh to ye aaj bhi mujhe khados samajhati hai)
.

---
one the other one lady comes out airport n waiting for his driver..
dirver comes n stoped care in front of her..
ahe sits inside car n driver put her laguge behind dikki..
.
Girl talk on mobile..
ya dad dont warry..
yaa main airport se nikal chuki hoon,
nahhi nahii sidha gher nahi aongi ..
pehale mujhe mol main kuch kaam hai,
yaa sure dont warry dad,
n cut the call,
A big evil smiled on her
face ..i m back baby i m back..
---
riya playimg in water..
but tabhi ek badi laher aati hai ..
n she lost her balance,
she tightly closed her eyes..
but before she fall someone tightly hold in his arms..
she felt srong arms around her waist ,
she slowly opened her eyes n saw arjun holding her ..
arjun hold her right hand with his left hand n his one hand around her thin waist,
.
On the other riya heart is moving fastly n oper se its mid evening..
Dalta suraj.. n rays hits her face due to this her face is glowling..
Riya felt arjun graze on her,
arjun looking her without blinking his eyes..
Riya look up to face him,
she looked arjun deep black eyes..as they wanna to speek somthing..
she looked his face ..




Edited by Piyarani - 24 April 2013 at 12:57am

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 11:11pm | IP Logged

(Arjun's silky hair hava ke karan lahra rahe they)
boths lost for few minute in each other eyes,
after few minute arjun brook that eye look..
.
Ar-tum thik ho..
but she stil lost him..
.
arjun again ask..r u ok riyaaa..
Ri-haan haan i m alright..she looked other side..
arjun stil holding riya..
Riya looks somthime him n somtime other side..
.
Arjun relise whats the resion..
He imediatly lift her up..n mamage to stand her proper..
n remove his hold..
Ar-voo oo main..
to makes situation normal arjun said..
haan haan or jao pani mai arjun mukhe pani main khelana hai,
haad hoti hai lapervahi ke riya,
.
Ri-with saying anythink lower her head n listen him..
after few minute she spoke..
make a pupy face- kuch huya to nahi,
.
Ar-hota kaise maine time per aker pakad jo liya..
ab sham ho gaye hai..chalo gher..
riya sliently follow arjun..
riya in mind (hun care bhi dekhayega to akadu style main..but i liked it..n flash her dimple smile)
TBC-
hop u like..
mast ya bore..???
i m waiting...
ok buy its enough for today...




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