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Ariya FF : Tum ho mera pyaar*Thread 2 link pg114* (Page 18)

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 4:31am | IP Logged
hey sorry for the late comment...
the update was superb...
ohhoo kiss hote hote reh gyi...
fb scene was awsum... o terri ek aur slap arjun ko...
riya aur kitne slap maregi bechare ko...
auto scene was lovely...
aur ye konsi girl wapis aarhi h?? is it roshni?
precap is interesting...
continue soon...

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 7:17am | IP Logged
wow...
loved it...
update soon...

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Just read it..
It was awesome update..
Beautifully written..
Liked it..
Continue Soon..

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Suprb update bechara arjun ko thapad mil gaya luved it cont soon watng fr nxt update and thanx fr pm

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
Thank u so much guys n frs for ur lvly n sweets comment...
i will update next part soon..
just wait for few minute hop u all liked...
sorry for any error..
bez error kerne main sabse age hoon lolll...
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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
Back with next part hop u like...

PART=6
"Barish aa ker phir tham
jaati hai..to mujhe ek dosara moka kyun nahi---- --------(arjun suryakant rawte)"
-----
.



.
SCENCE-Ariya r in auto..
Ri-Arjun hum kahan jaa rahe hain,
.
Ar-jahan ye auto vala hamen le jayega,
.
Ri-plz bolo na arjun,
.
Ar-Aree baba kitana bolati ho tum ..
kuch time ke liye chup nahi baid sakti..
.
Ri-noo never or ye tum bhi achhe se jante ho,
riya mukhargee ne kabhi bhi chup betana nahi sikha,
per dosaron ko chup kerana achhe se ata hai,
riya give her big cute dimple smile,
.
Arjun looked her n for that second he lost in her smiles..
--
past-
Arjun yelled on riya..
h dare u slapped me twise in a day..
.
Ri-The same mr acp u touched me twise in a day..ups not twise..balki several time,
mujhe to ehsa lag raha hai,
ke tum mujhe touch kerne ke bahane dhoond rahe ho,
.
Ar-What..? kya bakwas ker rahi ho..arjun turned his face other side,
arjun pissed his teeth ye ladki ..ye ladki samajhati kya hai apne aap ko,
.
Sudenly door opened ...
kunal(ooty etf cheif) n commisioner (Benoy mukhargee) enters in the room..
riya's face opposite to both,
arjun moved toward commi n kunal..
Ar-good evning sir,n dont warry sir aapki baidi kaa jald pata chal jayega,
.
commi just nodded his head(as he wad very worried for her doughter)
i hop so,
but any way abhi hum case per dhayan dete hain,
.
"when commisioner spoke riya heared her dad voice,her joy hav no limite now,she tured her face toward the voice,yes it was her dad.."
.

.
Ku-kuch bataya es ladki ne,
.
Ar-mahi abhi tak to kuch nahi bataya but i hop jald he sab kuch bata degii..
.
riya runs toward her dad n arjun stood in mid..
riya pushed arjun away n hug her dad tightly..
.
when she pushed him away,
the first word arjun's mouth comes out...What



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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 11:10pm | IP Logged

What the hell..?
arjun..turned n shocked to saw riya hugging commisioner..
arjin n kunal both r confused n looked each other..ye chal kya raha hai..
.
when commi also hug her back..then kunal n arjun shocked more,
.
(He he abhi to shock treatment start huye hai loll poor arjun)
.
Dad where r u...apko aab meri yaad aye hai..
.
She hugging her dad n start complaining,
both arjun n kunal mouth opened in what the o look..
.
Shree comes inside n notice his both seniors..
Sirr sir shree shouted..
both comes out their trance..
sir she is commi doughter..
riya riya mukhergee,
Shree gives one photo to arjun,
arjun took that pic,it was riya's pic with commi.
shree muttered under his breath..
ab to arjun sir ko koe nahi bacha sakta..sare mujarimon ko chood ker ek commi ke baiti he mili the pakadane ke liye,
maine to pehale hi kaha tha arjun sir se,
etani khubsurat ladki mujarim ho hi nahi sakti..
--
Riya break that hug look toward arjun(holding her fathers hand,just wanna to show him now her father support also with her)
.
Commi-riya tum yahan..tum to race course ke liye gaye di,
.
Ri-(stil looking arjun)
yaa dad ,race ke baad mujhe etf office ana pada..ek case ke silsile mai,

Co-case ..? per kon saa..
.
She comes near to arjun with mischivious smile..
Ri-ab ye to apko mr acp arjun hi baata sakte hai,
Sje rised her eyebrow ..
.
kyun sahi kahan na main..mr Arjun..
arjun didnt know ,how he reply ..?
riya comes near to him n wishper slowly ..only arjun can heared..
kyun bolati baand ho gaye acp.
maine to pehale he worn kiya tha,mujhase panga maat lena..per tumne meri soni he nahi,
next time kisi ko arrest kerne se pehale,
uske baare main achhe se pata ker lena,
Arjun give her dead look,
Uff stil dam atitude,
manana padega vaise bade cool lagte ho dam look main bhi,
tumhen nahi lagta





Edited by Piyarani - 23 April 2013 at 11:50pm

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