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Ariya FF : Tum ho mera pyaar*Thread 2 link pg114* (Page 14)

Hue.Splash IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Di big wala sorry for late comment.

And the chapter ..
I love this riya of urs and arjun too..
Wow arjun is smiling... Lovely..5 yrs k baad..
Unki frndship is so cute...i want more fb scenes...
Sam's dad is really sweet..

And arjun shirtlesss...
Hot hot hottt lag raha hoga..
Kash mil jaye..

Riya and arjun on the bed..arjun on top of lovely..romantic..
Bich mai rok diya di...usk baad kya hua..

And rosh...uski entry...arjun ka kya hoga..

Love this riya..
And thanks fr pm di...
Luv u.

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IlaTanwar IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
nice yaar jyada likhti aur pm kar diya kro...

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ll_piya_ll IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 11:01pm | IP Logged

Thank u so much for liking n ur lvly comments back with next part hop u like...
sorry for any error...
he he he ...bez error main to no one hoon lolll loll..
lv u guys for the privious comment...
u wanna fb for ariya past...
are saber karo...present ke story bhi age badne do...
or fb bhi milega but accordind to story..lolll
now enjoy... today part with some happy...
but wait for few minutes more...lolll

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devildiva21 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 April 2013 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
so sorry for the late comment yr... Embarrassed
superb update...
wah everyone shocked on seeing arjun laughing...
ariya scenes were cutee...
ye kya aiae point pe stop... kiss hua ke nai???
continue soon...

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ll_piya_ll IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 12:47am | IP Logged

Back with next part hop u like...
"bahar phir se aa sakti mujhe ek dosara moka kyun nahi
-------------(Arjun surayakant rawte)"
--- ----------


By mistaken ariya fall on the bed..
arjun looks in her deep coil black eyes,that r seeing him without blinking her eyes..
for that moment he wanna to lost her eyes,he dont know why he felt atractive toward him..the same she felt for him,
their eyes hv a capability to speeks many unspoken imostion..but may be they dont wanna to hear..
arjun closed his heart before five years..
he died his all emostions or felling what he felt for for..?
one insident changed every think in his life,
no one can think..
ek strong supper cop es taraha haar man lega..
he closed his life n stay away from every one..
his frs ,his family..but riya's arrival again his life..its again start some changes in his life..
he laughed again after so many years,or may be many thinks will gonna be changed in future,
She hav a capivility to make him happy..
but she made his controled lose again..
the fregnance of her deo made his sense lose,
arjuns lips wanna to find the way toward her soft lips..
that r shivering..may be his closer presence or may be she wanna to kiss him..
arjun leaned his face more closer to her their lips almost touched but stil apart..
riya closed her eyes as she saw his lips closer to her..
the unknow desire or felling start building up ..
remembering the day when he arrest her...
arjun was only in iterogation room..
SCENCE:-Ooty interogation room..
Riya was sitting on a chair hav one mischivious smile on her n arjun standing closer to her ,but her smile makes him more angry..
Arjun leand closer to her..
he unotics in anger he is very closed to her.

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ll_piya_ll IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 12:49am | IP Logged

Unwhere the fact that he is very closer to her..
Ar-So miss..amh..Kya naam bataya tumne..
Ri-Lagta hai tumhen case se jayada mere naam main interest hai guma phira ker lat ten time pooch choke ho,
do u think i m fool or small tum loly pop dikhayoge or main behak jayongi..
tum bahoot pachtaoge acp..ager mere baba..
that made arjun more anger..before she completed or told who is her baba..
Arjun hold her by her shoulder n made her to stand..
ab to main bhi janana chahta hoon tumhare baba kon hai,
bolo kiske liye kaam kerti ho,
his breath hit her face..
he looks very angry for one second her heart stoped beating..
she felt his eyes graze on her face..
she fearly looks up to face him..
for few minutes boths looks each other..
(as they r lovers meet after a long time or they never wanna to brack that moment)
arjun losted her blak deep eyes..
in few minute he notics or capture every small thinks of her face..
her eyes as deep as sea..
her nose he laugh in his mind..ek dam straght,
now his eyes graze fell down n he noticed her her her..
pink soft pink rose..
for that moment he forget what he thinking for her..
he leaned his face litle closer to her face..
he can feel her increasing heart beat..
that made his sense lose..
he hv no idea why that girl is effecting him so much..
he lost in his dreamland..
sudenly he felt one tight slaped on his face..ROFL.ROFL.
(He he he ops sorry i cant controled my laugh..lets read what happened)
arjun looks angry to her..
how dare u slaped me twise in a day,
Or tum tum kya kerne vale they..
apne lips per jara controlled rakho acp..vo danger jone ke taraf baad rahe they,
to controlled main rakhane ke liye dose dena jarory tha...
arjun turned his face imedeatly..
She start laughing madly.


Edited by Piyarani - 21 April 2013 at 1:30am

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ll_piya_ll IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 12:49am | IP Logged

Sudenly she start gilgling..
arjun comescout his trace..
he imediatly stood..
(ohh poor she she thinking he kissed her but arjun loll)
her eyes stil cosed bez she lost in past..
ager hasna hogaya ho tumhara to chalen..
arjun voice snnapped her thought..
she opened her eyes n found arjun standing there with crossed folding his hand..
Aaj jaane ka mod hai ya nahi arjun again ask..
she nodded in yes stil smile on her face..
arjun forward his hand to her,n help her to get up..
tumhari hasi dekh ker to yaahi lag raha hai..
second slap vala scence bhi aa gaya hoga tumhare dimaga main..
Yaad hoti hai riya thapad marne ke per tumne to...saying this he left the room..
Are ASR mere liye rokon..
She shouted from behind..
on the other somwhere
else girl took one photo in her hand..
tumne mere sath jo kuch bhi kiya achha nahi kiya..
or uski tumhen jo saja mil rahi hai vo bahoot kaam hai..
per maine tumhen phir bhi maaf ker diya..
kya karon tumse bahoot pyaar kerti hoon..
n after five years i m back in your life..
just wait for me..
tum sirf mere ho ..or sirf or sirf mere rahoge,
koe tumhen mujh se chin nahi sakta or main kisiko tumhen mijhase chinane bhi nahin dongi..
Naina arjun's mother to raaj-
aaj es ladki ke aane se mera arjun kitana khush najer aa raha hai,
usaki ye khushi dekhane ko kab se main tadap rahi the,
Raaj-haan ye to sahi kaha tumne,sach main es bachhi ke ane se ehsa lag raha hai,jaise jald he sab pehale jaisa ho jayega..
Arjun-chalo jaldy gadi main bedo..
she makes a puppy face..noo arjun gady se nahi,
auto se chalte hain..
Ar-auto se ..arjun comes closer n touched her forhead..
Arjun kya ker rahe ho she ask..
yahi check ker raha hoon tumhari tabiyaat to thik hai na..
she hits his hand that r stil on her forhead..
I m perfectly

Edited by Piyarani - 21 April 2013 at 2:01am

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ll_piya_ll IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 12:50am | IP Logged

Alright mr acp arjun rawte..
arjun took his hand back n turned his face away..
Its hurt arjun when she says him acp..
some old bitter momery flashes in front of his eyes..
are ye vahi acp hai..haan. haan esine kia hai..yaakin nahi hota,koe etana kaise gir sakta hai...*
before he lost more he snnaped out his tought when riya put her hand on shoulder..
arjun turned his face to face her..
she rised her eyebrow n ask what happened..
Ar-yahi soonch raha tha..
auto ke sakal dekhi hai jo auto main..hann..
She excitedly says..
nahi dekhi naa tabhi to..tabhi to auto mein plz plz arjun..
mere liye..i know tum na nahi kahoge..
Ar-fine jab tumhen pata hai ,main. naa nahi kahonga to etana kyun pooch rahi ho..
arjun stoped one autovala..
chalo baido auto aa gaya..hunhhh(making angry which coverup his pain)
Ri-waoo arjun(holding his hand) mujhe nahi pata tha auto main etana maja aata hai..
Ar-khush to ehase ho rahi ho jaise kise badi se car main baidi ho..hunh..
she rest her head on arjun shoulder n say..
tum ager sath choti choti jisen bhi achhi lagti hain
( she wishper slowly)
Ar-Kuch kaha kya tumne
Ri-nop no per vaise arjun hum jaa kaha rahe hai,i meen kon se jagah ghumane jaa rahe hai,
jahan ye auto vala le jayega arjun reply..
Ri-batao naa..
Ar-are baba kitana bolati hoo auto bale bhaye yahi rook do..
Ariya fun...
riya slept n arjun hold her...
arjuns pain...
Riya's goes etf to meet shree..
lot of unfolded past...
mast ya bor..???
plz waiting ...
u like story or not...???

Edited by Piyarani - 21 April 2013 at 2:23am

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