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Ariya FF : Tum ho mera pyaar*Thread 2 link pg114* (Page 10)

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 11:32am | IP Logged

Thank u so much for previous comment guys..back with next part hop u like..sorry if i bore
PART=3
"Suraj ke roshani her roj hoti hai to mujhe ek dosra moka kyun nahi ------- --------------(Arjun suryakant rawte..)"
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SCENCE-Arjun on the top of second second rider,
his body languge show that he is very angry on arjun..
He tried his best to free himself from arjun's hold..
.
(loll ab bhai arjun se khud ko chuda pana etana asan nahi)
.
Arjun hold rider tightly by using his hand..
The rider face stil covered with safty helmate,
Es vajaha se arjun uska face nahi dekh paya..
Arjun moved his hand wanna to remvoed his helmate..
but the man pushed his hand away..
Now the rider on the top of arjun..
(Hehhe but arjun is arjun)
He pushed rider away from him..
When arjun pushed rider away from him..
he lost his balance ..n fall..the end of cliff..(ek high hill se niche gir jata hai..)
.
Arjun heared one loud screamed, it was girly sound..yes it was girly sound,
.
Acctualy when arjun jumped on the rider,
he didnt even realize that they were landing just the edge of the cliff..
when arjun pushed him away..
he lost his balanced n fall down..
He felt his legs going to be down..
the fear of falling down..
he screamed out of his voice..
He was about to fall but very next instent he felt his hand grabbed by one strong hand..
.
When arjun heared one girly screamed ..
arjun avaj ke direction main dekhane lagta hai..
he saw rider sliding n just few centimeter apart from the egde of cliff..
he almost down but at the right time arjun hold his hand by his..
he was now in the mid air,floating..
.
in this process uska helment utter jata hai..
arjun looked widend his eyes..
whattt..? girl..she is girl
her hair was sliding down on her shoulder..
She looked up wanna ...


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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 11:32am | IP Logged

wanna to she..who is the one which hold her hand..
that was the same guy ..which spoil her game..
she is very near to her wining position..
but arjun spoil everythink..
"or opper se loll bechari hava main latki huye"(hehhee)
she looks angry toward arjun..
on the other arjun culdnt belive his eyes..
he was stil thinking it was just his illution..
arjunlooks her withoit brinking his eyes..
She looks perfet..
Arjun lost her beauti ...for few minute..(my note arjun is not lost her accutaly he was in shock..)
But soon he snapped his trace ..when she shouted..
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pehale kabhi ladki nahi dekhi kya..jo ehase goor goor ker dekh rahe hoo..
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Arjun ask her..Tum tum kon ho..
The girl was already fustrated ,bez of him she was floating in the mid air..
Gi-dekhaye dena band ho gaya hai..
tumhare karan main yahan latki huye hoon or tum pooch rahe ho main kon hoon..
Bas kuch hi door the main jeet ke..
per tumhari vajah se aaj main yahan latak gaye hoon..
Ohh God pata nahi kiska muh dekh ker udi the..
Sombady help help bachao mujhe..
Ar-(shouted on her)chillana band karo..give me ur another hand..
But she is so stunborn..
Why..?
Ar-bez i cant hold u long time ,meri grip lose ho rahi hai tumhare haath se..
.
ager marne ka shok nahi hai to apna dosra haath mujhe pakdao..
but she didnt give..
But after few second she feel her hand sliping on his hold...
She was very scared bez of falling down..
her heart beat is moving fast..
she looked down..n screemed..it was so deep..
if she fall down.. then definitly she gonna be dead..
she imagine her crual dead..
Ahh help help..bachayo mujhe main marna nahi chahti..Baba i promise main dobara racing..(she start panick)
Arjun yelled..What r u doing hillana karo ..verna gir jaogi..
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So arjun bent litle lower n hold her another hand tightly..
pulled her up..




Edited by Piyarani - 17 April 2013 at 12:11pm

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 11:33am | IP Logged
arjun pulled her up..she banged on arjun broad chest..
her heart beat stil not normal..
When arjun pulled her up..
she tightly closed her eyes..
N feel her body hit somthink..
she tightly clenched his shirt,
embedded her face on his broad chest..
Their heart were pounding hard..
when she hold his shirt..
That was the first time when any girl hug him..she is very near to him..for that second his heart forget to pound..
(hehehhee poor arjun shock per shock per abhi or baki hai..abhi to shock tratment start huye hai loll age age padiye hota hai kya..)
ARJUN POV-
Arjun thinking in mind what to do or what not..
is i hug her back..??
is i hv to consol her..?
noo no she is culpit..
i hv to arrest her..
but she looks so innocent..
vo criminal kaise ho sakti hoon..
nooo arjun focus karo ye kya sonch rahe hoo,
Aaj kal sare criminal inocent he dikhate haii..
ager kisi ne tumhen ek criminal ko hug kerte dekh liya to..
kya sonchenge tumhare bare main..
mana ke vo kubsurat hai..
bilkul masoom lagti hai..
or umer bhi jayada nahi hai..yahi koe 17&18 saal..
ohh just shut up arjun age kaam hai to kya..hai to ek mojrim..
he was lost in. her thought..but snapped out when he felt one tight slap on his face,
He he he arjun rawte ko thapad..or vo bhi jab jab vo apne hosh main nahi..
ROFL.ROFL
.
on the other..
she tightly hug arjun..she didnt know what she is doing..
When she feel somone grip around her waist..
she lift her face up n looked him..
(When arjun was lost in his thought by mistake his hand atumaticaly moves aroung her waist)
it took some time to realize she was lost in some stanger arms..
she tried to remove his grip but he hold tightly..
n oper se he is the same guy..jisaki vajah se vo race nahi jeet paye..
She pushed arjun away n give one tight slap on his face.
She again wanna to ..




Edited by Piyarani - 17 April 2013 at 12:41pm

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 11:33am | IP Logged

To slap him but arjun hold her hand in mid..
how dare u slap me..u dont hav an idea who i m..
She yelled,
yaa u r stanger who spoil my mission(lolll she talking about race n arjun think somthink else),
Ahh yukk aaj tumhari vajaha se...(she stop in mid)
Ab vo mujhe chodega nahi..main to gaye..
(baad main bataongi vo kiske baare main bast ker rahi haii)
Ar-us se pehale main tumhen nahi chodunga..
arjun twisted her hand behind her back n pulled her closer to him..
.
she looks up in his eyes..
Ahh chodu..its hurting me..
.
but arjun in no mod to remove his grip..
bolo kon oon hai tumhare es mission main..bolo..
.
Why i was told u..who the hell r u,
(she tring to remove his grip)
just leav my hand..it not gonna be god for u..
u dont know about my baba..
if u know then u dont hav dare to touch me..
(He think ..she is talking about some don)
mujhe janana bhi nahi samjhe ya samjhayon..
Soon all polish officer n shree came there..
Ar-le jaeye ese or jaa ker esaki sahi jagah pahoncha dijiye..
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IN Ooty
ETF INTAROGATION ROOM:-
Bolo kon kon hai tumhare sath..
oh just shut up kitani baar tumhen bataon..ke main vaha race main participate kerne gaye the..
dekho hamen third degree use kerne per majbor maat karo..
But she reapeat the same diaolog..
tum log bachoge nahi..she yelled,bus mere baba ko ane do..
arjun fustrated n comes our the interogation room..
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IN CONFERENCE ROOM:-
Kunal chopda (etf Ooty cheif)
kunaal on phone-what..? when..?
dont warry sir hum jald he pata laga lenge..
Aap uski photo hame send ker dijiye..ji ji aap tension mat lijiye ,
--
Arjun goes in conference room..n looked tense kunal,
What happened kunal..?
Commi sir ke baiti riya mor main apne doston ke sath stadium gaye the,
usake dost to vapas aa gaye,
per uska kuch pata nahi...
TBC-
BIG SHOCK WAITING FOR ARJUN...


Edited by Piyarani - 17 April 2013 at 7:52pm

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:14pm | IP Logged


Sorry For any mistake..pm late karongiii...
when i write kya yahi pyaar hai..or pyar imposible...
lolll vo kya haiii abhi theorms or algebra mere dimag main ghum rahe haiiin...



Hop u enjoy n sorry for any error guys...
piya

Edited by Piyarani - 17 April 2013 at 7:54pm

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Ye ye..
Yiepee
me first...

Superd update.. Loved it..
Poor arjun, comm ki beti se panga le liya..ROFL

lol..
He was lost in her beauty..
Her face...ah ..ah.the innocent face Wink
he thought of hugging her or nt..n she..what have she done..lol..
she slapped him..n the cliff haning scene was awesome di..

Arjun is a cop n he is falling fr criminal ... Wardi pe daag ROFL

lol...
Nice updt..

Apka exms kaise tha..


Fr u.. Clap

Edited by Vampire-queen - 17 April 2013 at 1:33pm

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
WOW great Arjun arrested comissioners daughter... Great..
Riya slapped Arjun lol... continue soon

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
hi piyaHug...awesome updateClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 
riya is daughter of commisionerLOLLOLLOL...ab bechara arjun ka kya hogaLOLLOLLOLLOL...hanging garden scene awesome written...
 n waah arjun ko mast slap riya ke haath kaLOLLOLLOLLOL...loved it...update soon

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