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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 89)

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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
unres at pg 84Big smile
asal mai mai khud he bhool gaye the k maine apne comment edit he nae kia haiLOL...ishliye sooorrryyyTongue for late unresingLOL

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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 2:19am | IP Logged
1 whole day with gigolo?...omg...intresting cont soon

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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
yyipeee
preityyy u updateddd *does gangam dance* lol
the update was amazinggg and finely written as always 
soo manvi is guilty for what she did  umm its obvious and realistic but at the same time they are sinners... gota wait for what exactly satisfies this title from manvi's side 
and a white pure day with virat hmm sounds intresting 
this was my fav part 
"Being your slave, what should I do but tend
Upon the hours of your desire?
I have no precious time at all to spend
Nor services to do, till you require:" 

suits virat dammm well
thnx for the pm 
update soon 
lots of love Smile

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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
awesome update continue soon thanks for the pm 

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Posted: 24 May 2013 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
hayeee what an update preeto. Loved the everybit of it nd i enjoyed it a lot while reading it. Very well written dear. The starting was just superb haww manvi was cursing herself b'coz she thought she commited a sin nd cheated on her husband very poor soul she is nd feeling very bad for her. Then the cafe scene was also awesome. Aww virats head was painimg bt still he lied to her that he is fine, true gentleman. Then the hospital scene what is the mystery yaar who is the lady with virat plz clear it soon. And the end wala scene toh just mind blowing nw manvi will spend pure white day with him yeh kaisa day hota hai [:p] now eagerly waiting for the next part plz cont soon nd thanks for the pm

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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 12:15am | IP Logged
wow amazing update !!!! manvi's day out wit virat dats gona be fun. . .plz update soon

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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Wow
WOw
WOW
THIS WAS AMAZING/...YOUR AN AWESOME WRITER ...CONT SOON
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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Preeto tumne tho kaya kardiya  hyni  wow so cute update yar
 
 
 
 
 
I will be waiting for ur next update dear Heart


Edited by dairymilk12 - 25 May 2013 at 8:45am

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