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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 87)

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Hey preity wonerfull update i was thinking the other day why he
Needs money so much and u give me the answer befor i can ask
Now who was that girl?? I guess needs money for her
Viren and that samera there is something between them haina?
It was really a intersting update plz ubdate soon plz

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Syed695 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Superb...~!!! O God Maanvi feeling guilty for  a guy whoz not bothered...n Aliya trying to set them up..thats really nice n sweet...but Virat and Shakespeare..Wow..~!!! n then her visit to hospital was nice she got to see Virat once again..which in return offered her pure white day...Seriously I mean they will make use of it positively...Maanvi not sure...But Virat would...Professional after all..LOL
Waiting for next Preity...~!!!

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virman.lover IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
awesome update
luved it
one whole day with virat really excited
continue soon

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
Wow fab update.. So he want to spend a day with her.. Wink Fab hun.. Tongue Cant wait for next update.. nd who is dat lady..!!!

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manvilover18 Goldie
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
super update...
plzzz update soon...

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crazyvirmanians IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
Okkiee... So first for chapter 4
It was brillant as usual...
Thevthing u have have beautifuly described is Manvi's confusion bw Virat n Viren...
I mean my own head was spinning reading it... That part was Clap
Then all of a sudden Manvi hit him Ouch
All in all, a wonderful update, as different as u are

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Chapter 5...
Omg Virat n Shakespeare...
Okkieee so there s a mystery or history behind Vrat's character... Wacko
N He wanna spend a pure white day with Manvi Dancing
N in this udate, shower scene was beautifully described... 
Continuee soon preity 

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Posted: 23 May 2013 at 12:30am | IP Logged
hey buddy ...u took long time yaar..
but it was mind blowing one...loved it...
plzzz continue soon...and pm me

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