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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 85)

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by yaminnthida

First of all congratulaions preity for going over 100 likesPartyPartycongo shongo...
...
yeh toh honaa hi tha...u really deserved itThumbs Up

Damakedaar update PreityClapClapClap...i was really waiting for this update...Tongue...finally the waited moment had come...Big smile...virman mil gayye ......issi kaa toh intezaar thaWink...virman scene..hayye..maar dalaa...it was so awesome......
haww yeh kya..manvii hit virat......par is main manvi kii bhi galdi nahi hai...
manvi concern for virat...ahaanWinkTongue...
Ms CEO...arrgaAngry...timing hi bad hai uskaa...Angry...

"Fair is foul, foul is fair.

Fair is foul, foul is fair.

Hover'''...wow mast haiClapClapClap...loved the whole update to the core...HeartHeart...
yeh aakir main ladkii kon thi...Shockedi m his everything...how can she say tat...Confused...intezaar rahegaa aglee update kaa...plz continue soon...Embarrassed...finally pm milgayaaROFL...thank u so much for the pmHug

Haww kitna sundor congo hain re
I loved it EmbarrassedWinkBig smile
haww I forgot to comment in this OuchDead  koi nai abb kar lia EmbarrassedBig smile happy shappy na? Heart yumu
Heart  
loved ur comment
long comment muahh
Heart 
next pad abb Wink



haan rey bohot happy shaapyBig smileBig smileBig smile...HeartHeartu pie...muuah...abhi runs to read next updateWink

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yaminnthida

Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by yaminnthida

First of all congratulaions preity for going over 100 likesPartyPartycongo shongo...
...
yeh toh honaa hi tha...u really deserved itThumbs Up

Damakedaar update PreityClapClapClap...i was really waiting for this update...Tongue...finally the waited moment had come...Big smile...virman mil gayye ......issi kaa toh intezaar thaWink...virman scene..hayye..maar dalaa...it was so awesome......
haww yeh kya..manvii hit virat......par is main manvi kii bhi galdi nahi hai...
manvi concern for virat...ahaanWinkTongue...
Ms CEO...arrgaAngry...timing hi bad hai uskaa...Angry...

"Fair is foul, foul is fair.

Fair is foul, foul is fair.

Hover'''...wow mast haiClapClapClap...loved the whole update to the core...HeartHeart...
yeh aakir main ladkii kon thi...Shockedi m his everything...how can she say tat...Confused...intezaar rahegaa aglee update kaa...plz continue soon...Embarrassed...finally pm milgayaaROFL...thank u so much for the pmHug

Haww kitna sundor congo hain re
I loved it EmbarrassedWinkBig smile
haww I forgot to comment in this OuchDead  koi nai abb kar lia EmbarrassedBig smile happy shappy na? Heart yumu
Heart  
loved ur comment
long comment muahh
Heart 
next pad abb Wink



haan rey bohot happy shaapyBig smileBig smileBig smile...HeartHeartu pie...muuah...abhi runs to read next updateWink
haww Heart  ko copy kia... LOL maine bhi kia ...LOL copy
LOL

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by yaminnthida

Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by yaminnthida

First of all congratulaions preity for going over 100 likesPartyPartycongo shongo...
...
yeh toh honaa hi tha...u really deserved itThumbs Up

Damakedaar update PreityClapClapClap...i was really waiting for this update...Tongue...finally the waited moment had come...Big smile...virman mil gayye ......issi kaa toh intezaar thaWink...virman scene..hayye..maar dalaa...it was so awesome......
haww yeh kya..manvii hit virat......par is main manvi kii bhi galdi nahi hai...
manvi concern for virat...ahaanWinkTongue...
Ms CEO...arrgaAngry...timing hi bad hai uskaa...Angry...

"Fair is foul, foul is fair.

Fair is foul, foul is fair.

Hover'''...wow mast haiClapClapClap...loved the whole update to the core...HeartHeart...
yeh aakir main ladkii kon thi...Shockedi m his everything...how can she say tat...Confused...intezaar rahegaa aglee update kaa...plz continue soon...Embarrassed...finally pm milgayaaROFL...thank u so much for the pmHug

Haww kitna sundor congo hain re
I loved it EmbarrassedWinkBig smile
haww I forgot to comment in this OuchDead  koi nai abb kar lia EmbarrassedBig smile happy shappy na? Heart yumu
Heart  
loved ur comment
long comment muahh
Heart 
next pad abb Wink



haan rey bohot happy shaapyBig smileBig smileBig smile...HeartHeartu pie...muuah...abhi runs to read next updateWink
haww Heart  ko copy kia... LOL maine bhi kia ...LOL copy
LOL


haan isliyee toh hi 5...LOLLOL...i m lazy u noe...n i love copyingWinkWinkLOL

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Preity dear...wonderful update as usual...
I liked virat's character in this story...
I think he had some pressure in his life to do such job...
May be needed huge money to treat that girl...
But story is really interesting...
And dear plz pm me when you update or write any new os...I love to read your work...

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:58am | IP Logged
yes I know


n I am so lazy that I can't
 quote anymore :v
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 10:23am | IP Logged
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i was waiting for this from so long... thank u preetz u updated this one... i am actually falling for this story... i loved the update... n only bcos of u i hate viren... ( which hurts me )
anyways i love virat no matter what... i just cannot hate him... i am really happy with the way the story is progressing... Big smile Big smile awesoem work by u preetz Clap Clap Clap try to make it a little longer next tym... woww virat wants manvi to spend a day with him or else he wouldnt take money... now thats impressive... Wink ab pyaar ki shuruvaat hogi na even though slowly slowly... i am waiting for virat to fall for manvi... because once that happens, it will mark the beginning of real DRAMA...  Big smile Big smile


Edited by naina927 - 23 May 2013 at 2:28am

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 10:29am | IP Logged
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preetooo its been sooo long sorry yaar phirse late ho gayi Tongue
the update awesome fab as alwayz afterall meri allrounder frendji ne likha hai to yeh to hona hi tha na WinkBig smile
soo again virman met all thanx to aaliyah...but manvi was kinda embarassed or she didnt like virat's company at all...i dnt like wen she passed tht sarcastic comment feeling soo bad for virat...
par kya baat hai manvi ne ek hi baar mein uski awaaz peh chanli haye Wink

He looked at Manvi and laughed. "One ugly witch attacked me yesterday"
that was hilarious bechari manvi cant even react t it LOLLOL
that everything lady of viart is really disturbing manvi sumhow well thats a good sign for we virman lovers TongueLOL
and then again virman meet indirectly...virat realised tht manvi hates herr CryCry
and she was feeling guilty so she paid...
and now virat's reaction shows tht he is nt really money minded i so knew it frm the beginning...dil ki awaaz yu knowLOL
"Don't worry. Even I am regretting for that evening. I just want a day of yours not night. A white pure day. I know you are a Lord Krishna's Devotee. Take permission from him and tell me tomorrow. I am waiting"

this dialogue of virat shows that he has gt self respect tooo ...

ecited for the next update virman spending a day together ...Dancinghow will it be kya kya hoga and agar viren agaya toh ShockedShocked

update next part soon coz its really very interesting...Smile




Edited by kulsum_virman - 14 June 2013 at 10:24pm
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 10:35am | IP Logged
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