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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 81)

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smileysmi

Awsomee update...
End mein ladki kaun thi?
In this update I specially loved how expressed guilty manvi...lovely...
Thanks for the pm...
yeh LADKI AAKHEER  me thi kaun? ShockedOuch ROFL 
thanks dear read the next for all answers Wink

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Niaksharma

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Originally posted by Niaksharma

Update kab?
OMG khushi red hot rockers Party congo shongo ji WinkBig smileEmbarrassed

thank u
bt update kab?
after replying comments WinkLOL
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by monikaksl

nice updateClapmanvi is so nice n i love d way she cares 4 viratBig smile
who is dat lady?Angry
update soon
erm sochna padega she cares or not WinkConfused ROFL
thank you
keep urself hooked to the next  WinkBig smile
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tuba_KSG

yeshhh yesshh u Updated , yesh yesh Tongue ... !!!
Firstly Tow Congo For 100 Likes .. PartyDancing




cOming To The Update !!
That was Awe-awe-aWesomeee !!!

Perfectly Written yr     ..
Bechara VIRAT Big smile Ise kehte hn , FIRST MEETING , MEMORABLE MEETING  ROFL ..
But the Pain Behind this particular Scene wasss .. TOO MUCH .. kitna Dari v ti manvi , Viren Kamine Ki vaja se .. she was enjoying the touch of virat but Phir b Viren ki waja se ... URGHHH ... CryCry   "" VIREN  ""  AngryAngryAngry
And Oye hOye .. Itni care for Virat " Kia scene h BOSS EmbarrassedTongue .. Virat was such a caring one yrrr .. " Loved him " ..EmbarrassedHeart
Yeah .. I just Loved It ..
"you know the things we think is fair, not always are fair, they are foul. Don't think much. Do the fouls, if your heart says. Your heart is the biggest judge who can say what is fair and what is foul."  Heart Day Dreaming
I love Viren's DADI Hug.. " She is sOo  Unlike Viren " Confused
And vO vO vO Kon ti ...
Shocked
"" I am his everything "" HUH Bari Aii HUH HUH ...AngryCensored
Thanks Tuba
OMG so beautiful comment
I liked green green congo WinkLOL 
Next is coming Big smile 

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nisha_virman

really nice update
manvi is so sweet
she is worried for virat
who is " i m is everyting"
continue soon
Thanks nisha
next is coming WinkBig smile
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera.chaudhuri


First of all congratulations for crossing 100 likes Big smile Thumbs Up.. You deserved it Embarrassed.. And thanks for the hugs n kisses ROFL Hug..

Coming to the update, as usual it was awesome StarStarStar.. Mind-blowing..  Fatafati Wink..
Finally... Finally they met!!!
Wan Wan Emoticons 25Dancing  Kafi eventful meeting tha waise Wink LOL.. Both Virat and Manvi can never forget their first meeting Embarrassed.. Manvi's hesitation in the beginning was very well portrayed ClapClap.. Their intimate moments were just amazing P2007111614324970.. Beautifully written ClapClap.. Virat is quite professional.. He actually asked her about the money in between the kisses Shocked..  "he said looking into her eyes, but didn't know why he couldn't stare at them more. He looked down and murmured, I mean my charge." - But I think he felt lil ashamed of his behavior also.. Yaha to already kuch kuch ho raha hai  Wink LOL.. I guess after seeing her, Virat has also become a con...fused soul!! LOL * You know I loved that line* Tongue  Manvi was actually enjoying his touch and his sweet words P2007111614342353.. But Viren's words did not leave her mind Stern Smile.. His voice kept ringing in her ears and poor Virat had to suffer because of this Ouch.. But still he was being so nice to her Embarrassed.. There is a sweet, caring, loving Virat behind this money-minded gigolo Virat 4e5dd44a.. He asked her whether she was okey, told her not to panic and to close the door because she was not properly dressed.. All these little gestures made him unique Day Dreaming.. So Ms. CEO called him again LOL.. After all who can resist Virat!! Wink I loved the convo between Manvi and Viren's granny Big smile.. She really loves Manvi a lot.. "Doll, you know the things we think is fair, not always are fair, they are foul. Don't think much. Do the fouls, if your heart says. Your heart is the biggest judge who can say what is fair and what is foul." - Heart Heart Superb lines!! Manvi's thoughts, her dilemma is very well described ClapClap.. She is feeling guilty for hurting him but on the other hand she can't stop herself from thinking about him d200712191840005271.. She is comparing him with Viren already.. It means he made a good impression on her SAMWOO Emoticons 96.. Last scene was shocking.. Now who is that girl?? A new twist in the tale?? Loved the update Preity!!Heart Heart Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm Tongue.. Take care of Bengali babas ROFL Hug
Thanks Meera
so big comment yahooo LOLLOLLOL
but I am on res ROFL
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by manvilover18

awesome update...
plzzz update soon...
can't wait for next update...
thanks dear
next is coming WinkLOL
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pink1

nice part  he is running behind money and she is frustrated her husband now what turn take there life and how both will become one and he as gf or not to whom she spoke to his phone and what about when her husband get to know her truth behind him she doing what he will do and she will  understand what her heart want
Gigolo have gf hmm sochna padega
Hey loved your comment specially the line, he is running behind money n she is frustrated with her hubby
Embarrassed thanks Big smile

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