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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 79)

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 5:53am | IP Logged
update soon pieEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 7:32am | IP Logged
U r done with writing now UPDATEEE!!!!! Bache ke jaan loge kyaaa Cry

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by copypaste

res ROFL
Unres finally tujhe taras agaya ROFL
Uff tht was freaking hot
Ruk big cmnt frm lappy
Kal pakka
Bt btw ab woh ladki kaun hai urgh viraat Angry uff
Thank you very muchROFLROFL
so very thanks ROFLROFL
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kulsum_virman

preetoo iss baar jaldi unres karrahi hun bas tere liye Smile
and this update finally virman met and kya meeting hai yaar kabhi na bhoolne wali atleast virat ke liyeLOL

first her hesitation then she herself was enjoying his touch tht sounded soo real...
and virat kiss ke beech mein bhi money aur payment nai bhoola haan pakka business guyLOL
the romance was speechlessEmbarrassed
he actually asked her are you okay means he cares and he even locked the door and also later he was just soo concerned that she doesnt panick and that she closes the door soo i find a different virat behind the money minded gigolo virat...
and manvi ne viren ka frustration bechare virat par nikal diya ..i cant stop laughing on that ROFL
i know supposed to be emotional one but i cant help it bechara virat ROFL

aur double payment ke liye phirse taiyaar ho gaya ..yeh cheez kya hai aakhir now am a con...fused soul LOL
manvi  already caring for him soo much she was ready to pay triple just to help him aur itne dard mein bhi he was all set to flirt ...flirt kahinka LOL
and ab yeh kaunsi ladki hai yaar kamini kahan se agayi ...and i cant believe manvi actually called virat for asking how was he plus she was comparing between the two her husband and the guy she met today ...sounds like virat is gonna be lucky soon Wink

and viren's dadi i guess she is aware of all this ..dunno but the way she is behaving makes feel soo...


awesome update preetooo ...written soo well infact perfectly ...and story is getting soo damn interesting ...am loving it ClapClap
preetooo plzzz next part jaldii update karna yaaa mujhse aur meeru di's se ziada bheek matt mangwaWink

aur 100 likes ke liye 
Ha pata dar ke jaldi jaldi kia unres ROFL 
but dekh main bina dare abhi res karing ROFL

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shonaten

Amazing
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Niaksharma

Finally u updated...
Thank u...
Nd update was awesome...
I liked it...
Waiting for viren's reentry nd virmaan second meeting...
Continue soon...
Thanks khushi
I am updating again within few mins WinkBig smile
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ShivRajput

Fab update Preity.. Loved it..!!
Poor Virat was trying to be proffessional hun.. Wink and Manvi hurted dat poor soul... Wink still so caring.. Manvi was touched bt you brk her heart who was that girl in last.. Cant wait.. Continue soon.. plz.. Smile
Embarrassed Thanks Shivani
Virat toh bhut hi professional hain ROFL 
next is coming ...  welcome it ROFL
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by JESMY143VIRMAN

superb updateClapClapClap
who is she? Angryif virat has a girlfriend?Angryits shocking.plz say that was his sister.plz...
continue soon.Star
Gigolo ka gf hota hain? Shocked ROFL Wink  
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