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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 79)

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sana1203

Liked it...
Update soon
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsonu316

very good story
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nanditam2107

Oh man!!!! She hit him with a lampshade thinking that he was viren!!!! Lol...poor viraat!!!!!LOL
And I must say virat is so professional!!!!!Wink

Who was that lady who picked up virat's phone & told that she is everything???Shocked

anyways about the update, it was just amazing!!!!Big smile

Please do update soon, i can't wait to know who was that lady!!!!
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yep Virat is professional  Wink  
next is coming Dead
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by taahir004

An awesome chapter , well done
OMG taahir  Big smile  wat a awesome surprize
I know you haven't read it yet, may be busy on something
comment after reading will wait Big smile
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by alicemath

Hey Preity dear,
I knw m super duper late in commenting...wot to do...stuck wid exams...Big smile
Well...cuming to the update,...it wz amazing...Luvd Virman's first meeting...qute epic...n a memomarble one mostly for ViratLOL
Liked Virat's professional attitude...he askd abt his payment evn in midst of such a serious job Wink
Luvd the smal instances where u showed the  caring side of Virat...n Manvi...she was evn readyu to pay him triple so dat he chav sum rest...woow...m so luving these two...Embarrassed
Manvi n her Honeybees relation z too adorable...luvd these lines "Doll, you know the things we think is fair, not always are fair, they are foul. Don't think much. Do the fouls, if your heart says. Your heart is the biggest judge who can say what is fair and what is foul."
N whoever wz dat who answered Virat's phone...m already hating her...
Really hope dat psycho Viren doesnt return any time soon ...atleast till Virman meet again..Wink
M absolutely luving hw the story z going so far..
Plzz cont soon n thnx a loot for the pm!!! Smile
Divya Ouch  phir se bhut late Ouch 
thanks dear I love ur comment
next is coming WinkBig smileEmbarrassed  

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:33am | IP Logged
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unres...oops i forgot to unresOuchOuch...SORRYDisapprove
How can i forgotConfused...again sorry...and i am the first yayyyDancingDancing
awesome part...soo happy virat and manvi will spent one whole pure white day togetherBig smile...and then they will get to know each other eekss sooo excitedTongue...more then anyone elseLOL
still confuse whose the lady in hospital with virat...his mother or his sis...but glad to know virats side (little)...which is still a mistery
but one thing is clear he's one professional plus self respect fellowThumbs Up
didnt take mani's money Clap
and manvi's breakdown in the start that she has done a big sin that she stoop as low as her husband...that there's no difference now b/w her and her husband is sooo obvious... bilkul a/c to manvi's characterThumbs UpThumbs Up

"I too should leave, I have some work too" Virat told.

"You too do any work?" (Laughs) "Strange, what kind of work you can do I know better." Manvi stated sarcastically. Her words killed him; she attacked his heart with a dagger of words.

"Being your slave, what should I do but tend
Upon the hours of your desire?
I have no precious time at all to spend
Nor services to do, till you require:" 
He recited little lost.

 

 "Shakespeare?" she asked. "Humm" he smiled. She smiled back. Both sat on their respective chairs again.

at this...im speechlees

the shakespeare wording u add r sooo perfect for thisStar...outstanding amazingClapClap

manvi Cryis in sooo much pain and is jailed inside that urghh viren'sAngry house

the thoughts of manvi on rain shows this

plzzz cont sooonLOL



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