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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 78)

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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by devilaonmoon

awsm update... it was really hot... so manvi is already comparing between viren and virat!!!... she really did hit him that hurt!!!... shittt...!!!... and who is this girl who is telling herself virats everyting???... new churail in the story i guess... thnks fr th pm behena and pls update soon, i really love this story... :)...
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .jai.

Awesome update.. VirMan first meeting OMG ROFL  n VirMan cute Romance Aaye Haaye...Manvi's Concern for Virat was just fab..
Eagerly waiting for the next update N waiting for the New Twist ("I'm his Every Thing Angry)
Thanks Jai Embarrassed  everything is twist? ConfusedOuch read the next Big smile
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Madii786

Omg Omg Omg U Updated! Eeekkk

Awsome Update Yaar!

Oppsie Maanvi Hit Virat Shit!!!

Arghh Viren God!

Ruk Kyun Gayii!!

Excellent Update Cont Soon N Thanks For The Pm!
Thanks Madyaa for the excitement EmbarrassedBig smile  
Ruk gayi kuki bahut ho chuka tha  LOL
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetmanu

HEYY PREITY...
REALLY NYC UPDATE...
FINALLY THY MET N CONGO FOR COMPLETING 100 LIKES.:...
THIS UPDATE IS REALLY AWESUME...AUR kya baat hai manvi is caring 4 virat...gud hai n finally thy met...
mere update karne me 12 months
reply back karne me 8 months
likhne baithne me 18 months
kya karun? D'oh 

thanks dear for having patience
next is coming soon
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by virmanfan013

hey preeto again wonderful update haan

so finally viman met and what a meeting yaar

hmmm first manvi was hasitating but after sometime she was enjoying his touchEmbarrassed

haww manvi ne virat ke sar pot maar diya usko viren samajh kar poor viratEmbarrassed

love these lines " "Doll, you know the things we think is fair, not always are fair, they are foul. Don't think much. Do the fouls, if your heart says. Your heart is the biggest judge who can say what is fair and what is foul." very true lines

thanks for the pm

and plz this time cont soonEmbarrassed
Thanks Shivi red red comment huh? WinkBig smileLOLLOL thanks Embarrassed 
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Artii159

AWESOME UPDATE PREITY...LUVD IT...POOR MAANVI, STILL CONFUSED...LUV VIRAAT HE IS SO CARING, EVEN THOUGH HE DOESN'T KNW HER...WHO WAS DAT GIRL WHO ANSWERED VIRAAT'S PHONE? PLZ CONTINUE SOON PREITY...THNKS 4 DA UPDATE N 4 DA PM...Smile
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kateyes

Wht a wonderful n mindblowing update grl u really deserves 100 likes 4 disClap , virman can never ever forget dere first meeting SmileSmileSmile, maanvi's hesitation was portrayed very beautifully n virat was 2 much professional he was asking about payment btw kiss ShockedShocked n liked dat scene 2 very much whn he can't met his eyes with her i think she is affecting him , feeling shameful 4 wht he's doing  or after meeting her he also bcum confused soulWinkWink n whn maanvi stared enjoying his touch his 1 line bought her back 2 viren's world n wht she done was not wrong 4rm her side bcoz she had suffer alot n after dat he still being polite 2 her , flirting with her , caring n sweet asking her not 2 panic or close d door all his gesture shows dat he is a gud guy with gud heart 2  Maanvi n granny convo was really nice granny truly luvs her alot n indirectly saying her 2 do wht her heart tell her 2 do . Maanvi already comparing virat with viren n she was actually caring 4 him even call him 2 ask him is he ok or not n i think d grl who pick d call was 4rm virat family 4 whom he is doing dese types of job may b i m wrong but still i don't know y my mind goes 2 dat point Smile
OMG kat eyes ... Big smile what ur name? I am soo happy with your longgg comment
n must say u r a very smart reader
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amgud

sooorrryyy again for being lateCry
n now coming to the update...what a hawwwttt updateWink
only first meeting n that much romance eekssBlushing
love manvi's reaction her feelings...like although viren is such a jerk n all n although she has called a gieglo still she's in delima...n although she's enjoying his touch but could not get herself out of her husbands greediness n animal like behaviour...amazingly writtenClap
and then her confession to daadi is again showing her purity n that how much she's hurt...love hisAngry daadi's ans  "Doll, you know the things we think is fair, not always are fair, they are foul. Don't think much. Do the fouls, if your heart says. Your heart is the biggest judge who can say what is fair and what is foul."Thumbs UpClapClap outstandingly amazing 
virat...well he's defo a professionalLOL...i mean asking abt money in b/w kissesEmbarrassed
but he's also sweet n nice n caring toooApprove...
the way he was saying close the door as manvi is in very minimum clothing n also asking permission n saying "u ok"Big smile...these r little things but makeup one's personality...n mow after this i damn sure there will be some story behind virat alsoWink
thnkuu so much for the pm of such an awesome n hottt updateEmbarrassed
Thanks Nida
loved ur name and ur comment
always wait to see ur comment
next is coming
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