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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 76)

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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 2:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Faria12345

Hi Res! I'm ur new reader... N what can I say ur story is just fab... Unique concept n way different character traits then the show... U made my virat a play boy n viren a bad guy tch tch.. But LOVEEE it!!!! For the first time hating viren's character he is such a monster... Worse then an animal... How an he use his wife just to satisfy his needs! Jerk head n it hurts each time when he hits her without doing any fault n pressure her to be with him .. Satisfy him.. >.< well virat is doing the same thing but he has enough respect for ladies n all n LOve his attitude!!!
"o threesome... I will charge double" god that cracked me up! N manvi is struggling btwn fair n foul well she did the right thing of course! Loving how u moving forward in this story .. A sexy one indeed! N ur update is in need ;) god u should make a INDEX on ur first page cuz I literary check evey single page for next updates lol... But it was fun cux I read most of the comments n was affront with them.. So keep it up u r doing a great job! Double thumbs up!!
DO pm me I will be waiting xD n I hopeee viren doesn't come back until virman falls in love with each other :)!
Thanks and welcome Big smileEmbarrassed 
Hey I have an index in first page
just scroll down the 1st update Wink 

A little correction Virat is not a play boy here, he is a gigolo
and doing that stuffs is his profession and need, not passion and love
He is not doing these things to satisfy himself, he is satisfying others

Difference between viren and virat
viren satisfying himself and virat others Big smile



Edited by preity_d - 20 May 2013 at 2:51pm

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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update...

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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
When r u updating??? N ya gigolo my mistake..

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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Hey Preity dear,
I knw m super duper late in commenting...wot to do...stuck wid exams...Big smile
Well...cuming to the update,...it wz amazing...Luvd Virman's first meeting...qute epic...n a memomarble one mostly for ViratLOL
Liked Virat's professional attitude...he askd abt his payment evn in midst of such a serious job Wink
Luvd the smal instances where u showed the  caring side of Virat...n Manvi...she was evn readyu to pay him triple so dat he chav sum rest...woow...m so luving these two...Embarrassed
Manvi n her Honeybees relation z too adorable...luvd these lines "Doll, you know the things we think is fair, not always are fair, they are foul. Don't think much. Do the fouls, if your heart says. Your heart is the biggest judge who can say what is fair and what is foul."
N whoever wz dat who answered Virat's phone...m already hating her...
Really hope dat psycho Viren doesnt return any time soon ...atleast till Virman meet again..Wink
M absolutely luving hw the story z going so far..
Plzz cont soon n thnx a loot for the pm!!! Smile

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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 11:55am | IP Logged
I love to tell stories more than writing them  Tongue Wink ROFL

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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 11:58am | IP Logged
please update...please update...please update...

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Posted: 21 May 2013 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preity_d

I love to tell stories more than writing them
Tongue Wink ROFL


How long we have to waittt???? :/ already imapaitent.. U r torturing us by not updating

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Originally posted by preity_d

I love to tell stories more than writing them  Tongue Wink ROFL
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