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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 75)

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Posted: 18 May 2013 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Khushi

loved it...the best update...virat is soo caring and who was the girl who attended the call???update soon and plzzz PM me as i am a new reader...plzz PM...
Hey welcome new reader Hug 
Thanks for liking the story
Yes, Viart is caring

will surely PM you...  Embarrassed

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Posted: 18 May 2013 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
Update kab?

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Posted: 18 May 2013 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Plz dear update soon

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Posted: 18 May 2013 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
update...update...update
plzzz...sooon
update...update...updateCry
Cry
Cry

Cry
Cry

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Posted: 19 May 2013 at 1:02am | IP Logged
hey.. plz update .. dying to read the next.. eagerly waitinn.. well done.. gud gng.. just love this story to the core..cand their romance.. everything is expressed so beautifully.. one of the best stories i hv read.. pls dont make us wait more.. do update soon.. and plss pm me.. thanks

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Posted: 19 May 2013 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by stac.n

hey.. plz update .. dying to read the next.. eagerly waitinn.. well done.. gud gng.. just love this story to the core..cand their romance.. everything is expressed so beautifully.. one of the best stories i hv read.. pls dont make us wait more.. do update soon.. and plss pm me.. thanks
Hey thanks will surely PM you, if u r in my buddy list...  Big smile 
and will update within tomorrow Big smile 
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Posted: 19 May 2013 at 1:21am | IP Logged
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Posted: 20 May 2013 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
Hi Res! I'm ur new reader... N what can I say ur story is just fab... Unique concept n way different character traits then the show... U made my virat a play boy n viren a bad guy tch tch.. But LOVEEE it!!!! For the first time hating viren's character he is such a monster... Worse then an animal... How an he use his wife just to satisfy his needs! Jerk head n it hurts each time when he hits her without doing any fault n pressure her to be with him .. Satisfy him.. >.< well virat is doing the same thing but he has enough respect for ladies n all n LOve his attitude!!!
"o threesome... I will charge double" god that cracked me up! N manvi is struggling btwn fair n foul well she did the right thing of course! Loving how u moving forward in this story .. A sexy one indeed! N ur update is in need ;) god u should make a INDEX on ur first page cuz I literary check evey single page for next updates lol... But it was fun cux I read most of the comments n was affront with them.. So keep it up u r doing a great job! Double thumbs up!!
DO pm me I will be waiting xD n I hopeee viren doesn't come back until virman falls in love with each other :)!

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