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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 74)

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Posted: 11 May 2013 at 1:06am | IP Logged
hey preeto again wonderful update haan

so finally viman met and what a meeting yaar

hmmm first manvi was hasitating but after sometime she was enjoying his touchEmbarrassed

haww manvi ne virat ke sar pot maar diya usko viren samajh kar poor viratEmbarrassed

love these lines " "Doll, you know the things we think is fair, not always are fair, they are foul. Don't think much. Do the fouls, if your heart says. Your heart is the biggest judge who can say what is fair and what is foul." very true lines

thanks for the pm

and plz this time cont soonEmbarrassed

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Posted: 11 May 2013 at 1:39am | IP Logged
AWESOME UPDATE PREITY...LUVD IT...POOR MAANVI, STILL CONFUSED...LUV VIRAAT HE IS SO CARING, EVEN THOUGH HE DOESN'T KNW HER...WHO WAS DAT GIRL WHO ANSWERED VIRAAT'S PHONE? PLZ CONTINUE SOON PREITY...THNKS 4 DA UPDATE N 4 DA PM...Smile

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Posted: 11 May 2013 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Wht a wonderful n mindblowing update grl u really deserves 100 likes 4 disClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap , virman can never ever forget dere first meeting SmileSmileSmile, maanvi's hesitation was portrayed very beautifully n virat was 2 much professional he was asking about payment btw kiss ShockedShocked n liked dat scene 2 very much whn he can't met his eyes with her i think she is affecting him , feeling shameful 4 wht he's doing  or after meeting her he also bcum confused soulWinkWink n whn maanvi stared enjoying his touch his 1 line bought her back 2 viren's world n wht she done was not wrong 4rm her side bcoz she had suffer alot n after dat he still being polite 2 her , flirting with her , caring n sweet asking her not 2 panic or close d door all his gesture shows dat he is a gud guy with gud heart 2  Maanvi n granny convo was really nice granny truly luvs her alot n indirectly saying her 2 do wht her heart tell her 2 do . Maanvi already comparing virat with viren n she was actually caring 4 him even call him 2 ask him is he ok or not n i think d grl who pick d call was 4rm virat family 4 whom he is doing dese types of job may b i m wrong but still i don't know y my mind goes 2 dat point Smile

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Posted: 11 May 2013 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
sooorrryyy again for being lateCry
n now coming to the update...what a hawwwttt updateWink
only first meeting n that much romance eekssBlushing
love manvi's reaction her feelings...like although viren is such a jerk n all n although she has called a gieglo still she's in delima...n although she's enjoying his touch but could not get herself out of her husbands greediness n animal like behaviour...amazingly writtenClap
and then her confession to daadi is again showing her purity n that how much she's hurt...love hisAngry daadi's ans  "Doll, you know the things we think is fair, not always are fair, they are foul. Don't think much. Do the fouls, if your heart says. Your heart is the biggest judge who can say what is fair and what is foul."Thumbs UpClapClap outstandingly amazing 
virat...well he's defo a professionalLOL...i mean asking abt money in b/w kissesEmbarrassed
but he's also sweet n nice n caring toooApprove...
the way he was saying close the door as manvi is in very minimum clothing n also asking permission n saying "u ok"Big smile...these r little things but makeup one's personality...n mow after this i damn sure there will be some story behind virat alsoWink
thnkuu so much for the pm of such an awesome n hottt updateEmbarrassed

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Posted: 12 May 2013 at 3:14am | IP Logged
Liked it...
Update soon

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Nandita217 Senior Member
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Posted: 13 May 2013 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Oh man!!!! She hit him with a lampshade thinking that he was viren!!!! Lol...poor viraat!!!!!LOL
And I must say virat is so professional!!!!!Wink

Who was that lady who picked up virat's phone & told that she is everything???Shocked

anyways about the update, it was just amazing!!!!Big smile

Please do update soon, i can't wait to know who was that lady!!!!

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Posted: 14 May 2013 at 3:10am | IP Logged
An awesome chapter , well done

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 11:04am | IP Logged
loved it...the best update...virat is soo caring and who was the girl who attended the call???update soon and plzzz PM me as i am a new reader...plzz PM...

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