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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 63)

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
update kb karegi

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by meera.chaudhuri

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Awesome update Preity!!!StarStar Fantastic!! Loved the phone conversation between Virat and Manvi.. " "Oh, threesome. But it will cost double" he said professionally. " - ROFL Superb line! Loved Virat's attitude here.. The way he was talking to that CEO woman was damn hot Wink.. He was worried for Manvi because she disconnected his call! Ek call se hi uska yeh haal hai toh jab Manvi se milega tab kya hoga
MSN Onion Emoticon!! He kept his schedule flexible for her also Wink.. Manvi's dilemma, her fears everything is well portrayed ClapClapClap.. Haww Viren is back again!! D'oh Thank god his flight got delayed only not cancelled.. Loved the part where he unknowingly fixed her appointment with Virat Monkey Icons!! Superb! I really want Manvi to cheat on his hubby Approve.. That jerk again slapped her MSN Onion Emoticon Set.. Hate him Angry.. He does not deserve such a caring and loving wife.. Manvi's hesitation at the end was beautifully described ClapClap.. Finally Virman came face to face Dancing.. " Thank god you at last opened it. You really are a con'" he turned and saw her, "fused soul" he whispered." - Loved this little change in his voice and reaction on seeing Manvi Embarrassed! Now eagerly waiting for the next part.. What is she going to do now?? I want to know more about Virat's character also.. Loved it Preity.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care Hug Heart
Hate Viren, bravo you should not you said to make him as worse as possible ROFL 
Aww last line was superb na? Embarrassed
aur eagerly wait karke kya fayda? pata toh chal gaya shayad TongueConfusedOuch
thank u and take care of my bengali baba ROFL

Haww maine kuch nahi kiya ROFL  Haan meko pata chal gaya thanku ROFL Hug

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 3:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by surovita

superb . . .virat's charactr is reali awesum. . .argghh hate viren.. .hw dare he slap manvi dat to in public. . . Hayeee last scene atlast virman met. . . Plz update soon
Thanks surovita Embarrassed  I am happy that you liked Virat's character.
update is coming Wink

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 3:34pm | IP Logged
ruk after replying comments Tongue
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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 3:35pm | IP Logged
aaj hi karna kal meri 1st shaadi ka functin hai ROFL

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Syed695

Awesome Update...~!!! Virat called her back as he was restless cz she discoonected the cal...Damn that was Nice...Its not fair u stopped at a wrong point...Update next part soon...:)~!!
yeah, I am happy you point out the fact that Virat was little restless because she disconnected suddenly.
Thanks Fauzia Embarrassed

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 4:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by alicemath

Awsum update preity ji...
Virat wz totally distracted n restless by just a single call from Manvi...n hes keeping his timings flexible for her...woow...interesting start to their relation Big smile
Was shocked to c that jerk Viren bak...but relieved dat hez leaving...n the airport scene...ughhh...Hate Viren to the core..AngryAngry.hw cud he slap her in public n den simply apologise...
But luv him for indirectly fixing up Virman's meeting...LOL
As Virat's lines...Manvi truly is a "Confused Soul" ...she herself askd him to cum n dint opn up...but stil he waited for half n hr..."Thank god you at last opened it. You really are a con'" he turned and saw her, "fused soul" he whispered." luvd his slight change in reaction on seeing her...
Wot an interesting , different n mind-blowing concept...
Cant wait for the next update...
Plzz cont soon or atleast a precap wud do...plzzz
N Plz do pm me for ur future updates...Smile

Wow Alice divya what a beautiful and long comment Big smile
I like how you explain every happenings of the story
It made me worth writing
Thank you very much Embarrassed
Loved ur comment Star 
next is coming Wink
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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aenna

Ufff aat last dey r infront of
each other... Cant wait for dem to
feel each others pain
plzzz update asap plz
thanks Embarrassed
for the meet look at the next Embarrassed

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