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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 62)

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by Niaksharma

Update?
Soon...
:(
after 2 hours Wink <font color="#0000FF" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="4">ROFL</font>

nooo...
2 hours?
Mujhe 5 baje uthna hai kal...
:(...
Ok koi ni... Kitna tadpaugi?...dekh lenge...means read kar lenge kal...:(

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
yess update two hours mein !!
yay yay
jaldi jaldi please Big smile

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Update..?? :(

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Niaksharma

Originally posted by preity_d

Originally posted by Niaksharma

Update?
Soon...
:(
after 2 hours Wink <font color="#0000FF" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="4">ROFL</font>

nooo...
2 hours?
Mujhe 5 baje uthna hai kal...
:(...
Ok koi ni... Kitna tadpaugi?...dekh lenge...means read kar lenge kal...:(
aww sholly khushi Tongue But abhitak likhna complete hi nai hua hain ROFL  
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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by __Aarti__

fruity tu fir se apne bachpane wale mode me aa gayi ...
i am telling u again


tu sach me pagal hai ,

but fir bi i love you ...


chal ab overacting mat kar ... tere pe suit ni karti ...hahahaha... :*
sholly WinkTongueBig smileLOLConfusedOuchShockedStarEmbarrassedROFL   


sun me teko bahut sara I love u bolto carrot ROFL  
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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yaminnthida

resTongue...jald unres kardungii..Smile

URES...

Superb awesome update preityClapClapClap...kya mast update tha...Wink...really loved it...StarStarStar...viren was bak ...i was like haww...Shocked...accha howaa sirf delayed howaa...not cancelledWinkBig smile...when the phone started ringing infront of viren i was really scared...ab kya hogaa...thank god bach gayee...Tongue...n the airport scene...Cry...bechari manvi...CryCry...i really hate viren alot.Angry...how can he slap her hard...CryCry...finally usne virat ko bulaa liyaa...yayy...Dancing..finally virman aamne sammne...Big smile...par yeh kya yahaa rok dalaa..i wanted to read more...Tongue...fantastic preity...realy really fantastic..Thumbs Up...really excited to read next part...will be eagerly waiting ...plz continue soon if possible...Tongue...looking forward...Star...thank u so much for the upcoming pm preity...Smile

Ha yamin tune bahut jald unres kia...hugs
Thanks dear Embarrassed updating WinkLOL 

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ankzmishra

hey i am not 18+ still luv to read it Embarrassed actually i am kinda besharam in case of virman Tongue
so i read all the three parts nd they were just superb... ClapClap 
hating viren to the core Angry he is more devilish than a demon Cry poor manvi
feels bad for her nd atlast she called Virat yeah!! Big smile ab ayega maza Wink 
update asap nd do pm me Big smile
 
He he but 18+ doesn't mean only hot scenes, it means complex emotions too
Thanks dear liked your comment a lot Embarrassed
will surely try to PM you Big smile

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by meera.chaudhuri

Res Geek
Unres Embarrassed

Awesome update Preity!!!StarStar Fantastic!! Loved the phone conversation between Virat and Manvi.. " "Oh, threesome. But it will cost double" he said professionally. " - ROFL Superb line! Loved Virat's attitude here.. The way he was talking to that CEO woman was damn hot Wink.. He was worried for Manvi because she disconnected his call! Ek call se hi uska yeh haal hai toh jab Manvi se milega tab kya hoga
MSN Onion Emoticon!! He kept his schedule flexible for her also Wink.. Manvi's dilemma, her fears everything is well portrayed ClapClapClap.. Haww Viren is back again!! D'oh Thank god his flight got delayed only not cancelled.. Loved the part where he unknowingly fixed her appointment with Virat Monkey Icons!! Superb! I really want Manvi to cheat on his hubby Approve.. That jerk again slapped her MSN Onion Emoticon Set.. Hate him Angry.. He does not deserve such a caring and loving wife.. Manvi's hesitation at the end was beautifully described ClapClap.. Finally Virman came face to face Dancing.. " Thank god you at last opened it. You really are a con'" he turned and saw her, "fused soul" he whispered." - Loved this little change in his voice and reaction on seeing Manvi Embarrassed! Now eagerly waiting for the next part.. What is she going to do now?? I want to know more about Virat's character also.. Loved it Preity.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care Hug Heart
Hate Viren, bravo you should not you said to make him as worse as possible ROFL 
Aww last line was superb na? Embarrassed
aur eagerly wait karke kya fayda? pata toh chal gaya shayad TongueConfusedOuch
thank u and take care of my bengali baba ROFL

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