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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 53)

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 1:37am | IP Logged
heyaaa i read the previous three updates together and ur stiry is diffrent actually really diffrent but at the same time the concept is a bit realistic as well.. really liked the way u skecthed manvi's miseries and sorrows instead of having a nyc husband how he turns into a devil and virat's character is reallyyy diffrent never thought of this kinda stuff on him but like it to the core loved all the updates and hate viren urghh lol update soon and pm me if possible

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 1:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vamps1996

heyaaa i read the previous three updates together and ur stiry is diffrent actually really diffrent but at the same time the concept is a bit realistic as well.. really liked the way u skecthed manvi's miseries and sorrows instead of having a nyc husband how he turns into a devil and virat's character is reallyyy diffrent never thought of this kinda stuff on him but like it to the core loved all the updates and hate viren urghh lol update soon and pm me if possible
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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Wahoo

U updated! *im dancing*

Loved The Update It Was Fantabulas! Amazing Im on Cloud Nine!

Argh Viren Gosh I Have Never Hated Him This Much He slapped her infront of everyone! Idiot!

Ekk Virat Has Finally Met Her!
Can't Wait For next Update!

Plzz Do Be Quick!

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Cheating cheating cheating.. u said Virman meeting in dis part bt wo to yaha bas ek dusre ko dekha ROFL nthn much.. lol Jokes apart.. fab update.. can understand Manvi's turmoil nd Viren indirectly arranged Manvi's meeting with Virat.. Cant wait.. Continue soon!!!

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
haww itte kam comments D'oh   ROFL


I am mad
hush hush who knows it??? ROFL
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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
this story is nice in this story viren is a psycho a what the way he behave with her  I think he doesn't have heart and about virat how he can help her how there love stories start update fast 

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by naina927

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