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Sinners(VIRMAN n ZaYa STORY 18+)latest pg127 (Page 51)

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
This Viren, ugh! seriously is a maniac, Evasive Idiot!
Coming to the update, u again stopped at a wrong point...D'oh
Very well written yaar, manvi's confusion beautifully depicted!! Good job buddy, but jaldi se continue karna, warna i'll kill u...

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Aashika_virman Goldie
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 11:24am | IP Logged
ohh no you cant stop there...Ouch 
i thought virat is good gigolo.. but he loves money..i was like bacchhuu wait until u meet manvi...
isss cyko  viren AngryAngry ki tho mein band bajjaa dungi..stupid idiot ..i hate him..he  insecurity and doubtfullness,lack of trust on wife like manvi will lead him to mental asylum for sure...
finally manvi opened the door to her futureEmbarrassedEmbarrassed..
please update soon

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Awesome update!! Plz update soon

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Awesome update. Her husband is a complete jerk. How can he do this to her.
Eager to know how virat and manvi's meeting will go. Continue soon.

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Superb update... HATE HATE HATE... tht viren way too much... How dare he cme bck again!!! But they say tht, everything happens fr a good reason.. nd its true viren wrked as a fates puppet to get our "pyare" virman meet each other.. So ths time im forgiving him.. Virat is already feeling smething smething aftr talking to manvi on phone..awww.. nd they r finally face to face.. th last line was awsm.. Waiting fr hot shot updts nd Virens murder eagerly, so cont soon pyarii behena meri... thnks fr th pm bag..

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by devilaonmoon

Superb update... HATE HATE HATE... tht viren way too much... How dare he cme bck again!!! But they say tht, everything happens fr a good reason.. nd its true viren wrked as a fates puppet to get our "pyare" virman meet each other.. So ths time im forgiving him.. Virat is already feeling smething smething aftr talking to manvi on phone..awww.. nd they r finally face to face.. th last line was awsm.. Waiting fr hot shot updts nd Virens murder eagerly, so cont soon pyarii behena meri... thnks fr th pm bag..
LOL behna who said you that VIren will be murdered??? ha ha ha ROFL  
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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
awesome update
i hate viren
finally virat maanvi met
loved it
plz cont soon

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
nice update please do continue soon thanks for the pm

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